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Title: Two Steps Forward 28 Feb 2018 4:10 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    I BLOODY WELL KNEW IT!!! I KNEW THAT HARRY'S MAGIC WOULD MAKE A DAMN DIFFERENCE!!!!
    GREAT CHAPTER! Keep writing! Be happy!
Title: Two Steps Forward 08 May 2008 7:10 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Two Steps Forward 03 May 2008 6:18 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter. Nice to see Tobias' changes, both within himself, and with Harry. And Harry's loving magic moved me to tears.

    Author's Response: Awww! I love it when people cry over my writing, because it shows that I've touched the right emotional chords and that's what I'm aiming for.  So thanks and there're more part where you'll need Kleenex, LOL.  This was a very emotional story for me to write.
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 1:52 pm
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! This was a great chapter, I was glad to see Tobias warming up to Harry, and feeling guilty for being to harsh with Harry. He's sort of really rough around the edges but I'm sure if you dig deep enough he would be squishy in the middle. LOL. Can't wait for Severus to be back, and see what happens after that. Keep it up. LES

    Author's Response: You're right, he's gruff but deep down he really does care about Harry and Severus too
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 7:59 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter. I'm happy that tobias isn't a total butt.

    Author's Response: Yes, even he has his good points and he is trying to change for the better.
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 7:04 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Happy Birthday! Yesterday was my sister's birthday.

    Excellent chapter! As always. I'm thrilled to see Tobias and Harry starting to get along. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Wow it was my sister's too! How funny! Glad you liked this one!
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 4:42 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    That was good! thanks for another chapter so soon after the last one! I'm really curious to see Severus' reaction to the "new" Tobias when he awakes...

    Author's Response: Oh, you'll be seeing it all right! 
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 4:27 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    It's intersting to see Tobias being nice for a change. I wonder if Sev will ever forgive his father after he realizes the man can be nice. Excellent chapter as usual and also- Happy Birthday! :)

    Author's Response: Sev may or may not forgive him, remember he has a lot of emotional trauma to work through since Tobias hurt him very badly.
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 3:13 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story... Harry love heals both his father and his grandfather of what ails them

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY hope you get whatever you desire

    Author's Response: Yes, love really is the most powerful form of magic.  Thanks very much!
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 2:33 am
Reviewer: PyroChilde (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter. You really write Tobias wonderfully. He isn't just some cardboard cutout, he actually seems human and had emotional depth. I love that he's looking back on his son's childhood with regrets and trying to do better with Harry. I love your last sentence too! Can't wait for Sev to wake up and to see the fall out!
    ~Brandi~

    Author's Response: Thanks so much, Tobias was a difficult character for me to write because I wasn't sure how to portray him at first, and then I finally got the idea to just make him a man who had a lot of problems and was just beginning to realize the mistakes he had made and how he didn't want to repeat them with his grandson.  I love writing stoies with redemptive themes, because I believe that everyone deserves a second chance if they want it.

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