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Title: Never Again 08 Jan 2023 5:46 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    I mean i get why but severus is such an unlikeable arsehole in this story. Honestly, he's only likeable when harry and matt are talking about him; when hes awake and talking, my only thought is like f*** him
Title: Never Again 19 May 2008 8:13 am
Reviewer: Lily Elizabeth Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my god! You made me feel sorry for Tobias Snape! And coming from m y past, that's bloody impossible! You are an evil, evil genius! It's 1:12 am and I'm a teacher... I've got to get to bed, but I can't wait to come back to this story.

    Btw, I'm glad you mentioned in your review of Eight you'd like me to read a story of yours. You rock, girl!

    Author's Response:

    Hey, i used to teach too--Pre-K in Florida for about two years and ESL and English for a year until I had to switch jobs (now I work for B&N) since my mother developed Parkinsons and I needed to move in with her.  So I know where you're coming from.

    As for Tobias, he is based a great deal on a former alcoholic of my acquaintance, a relative actually, and most of his behavior and mannerisms are drawn from this person and the redemption part is also true. Many of my fictional characters are based upon real people I know or knew, which I guess is why they seem so real to me. I really pulled out all the stops for this one. . . emotionally speaking.  When I finished this I was a wreck, emotionally drained, but then that's how you're supposed to feel when you write something like this.

    I'm glad you're enjoying this and there's more drama to come!

Title: Never Again 08 May 2008 7:44 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh That is such a sad ending!

    Author's Response: Yes, I know, poor Tobias.  But eventually things get better!
Title: Never Again 03 May 2008 9:30 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a terrific job you're doing with a wonderful story! I have only one small continuity problem to point out. Both in the previous and next chapters, you mention it's three months that Severus was in a coma.
    However, in the first paragraph of the 2nd section here, you wrote: "...the paperwork that had mounted up while he was in a coma for over two months."
    This jars the reader, since it doesn't match with the "three" we remember.
    Feel sorry for poor old Toby--I know he didn't mean to screw up like that.

    Author's Response: Whoops, you're right, I'd forgotten to adjust that.  When I first started this, I wasn't sure how long I was going to have Sev remain in a coma, and was waffling inbetween a little over two months to three and finally decided to go with three.  Thanks for reminding me.
Title: Never Again 27 Apr 2008 1:54 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww, he has got it now. Should have known better in the pub!

    Author's Response: Yes, he has indeed, but maybe now he'll know better!
Title: Never Again 25 Apr 2008 6:37 pm
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    oh my goodness, well they say that bad habits are hard to break. As bad as I feel for Tobias not being able to see Harry, because of what happened, I don't blame Severus one bit, for being as furious as he was. He just isn't going to take that chance with Harry's safety, and it's understandable. Hopefully they'll be able to work something out.

    Author's Response: Yes, eventually they might do that, but right now Sev doesn't want to see Tobias at all!
Title: Never Again 23 Apr 2008 2:18 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yikes!!!

    Author's Response: Yes indeed!
Title: Never Again 23 Apr 2008 12:36 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow...it only took one night of drinking to destroy everything...

    maybe this will serve to remind him the next time he wants a drink!

    Author's Response: Yes I think it will!
Title: Never Again 22 Apr 2008 11:37 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG, such an emotional chapter! I didn't know who to feel worse for--Severus for seeing his child all hurt that way, Harry for not knowing why the heck his grandfather suddenly morphed into the nasty beast from hell, or Tobias who was led down the garden path by his so-called friends and now has lost everything.

    Author's Response: Me either, I think you can feel bad for all of them!
Title: Never Again 22 Apr 2008 11:34 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome story! I just about cried myself at that last line! The poor family, I hope they manage to come to some kind of understanding soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks and you'll see what happens next soon!

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