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Reviews For Never Again!
Seeruk Author's Response: Ouch! I don't know if Sev will go that far however there will definitely be consequences.
Author's Response: You're right and there will be a discussion about that before Sev punishes him, but Harry also knows better than to go in there, and has been told repeatedly never to do so. Thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Yes, he is indeed!
Author's Response: Yes, indeed, for the important thing to remember here is that Harry did indeed know what he was doing was not permitted, since he'd been told repeatedly not to go in there, and did it anyway on spite.
Probably give him The Time-Out to End All Time-Outs. And the little snot would deserve it. :-P But seriously, why wasn't Sev's Lab locked? Or had an alarm set on it, in case any 6-year-olds decided to make free with the ingredients? For someone as safety conscious as Sev is about his son, not having locks or magic alarms doesn't make any sense to me, so the trouble Harry gets into didn't seem likely to me. I suggest have him get mixed up in cooking in the kitchen. Plenty of messes (occasionally dangerous ones) to get into there, without breaking this reader's suspension of disbelief. Author's Response: Normally, his lab is locked, so you'll see why it wasn't, and he was never intending to be that long speaking to Matthew, it just happened, but your idea was a good one too, it simply didn't occur to me.
Poor Harry. He deserves whatever punishment Sev decides on. Hmmm...If I'm not mistaken according to Sev's rules putting yourself in danger warrents a spanking? Poor kid...but it will be deserved. Excellent chapter! As always. Can't wait for the next. Author's Response: I type very quickly and I keep a notepad on me so I can scribble down ideas when I'm away from my computer. I write a lot at night after I'm done with all the usual things, dinner, helping my mom, I live with her since she has Parkinson's and need someone to be with her all the time and dad can't manage, he's got a really bad back, and rather than pay someone . . .Anyway, you're right about part of Harry's punishment, the other part will be a surprise. |
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