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Reviews For Never Again!
love the whole tobias is watching thing sev will come around he has to see toby is trying - if grandpa was evil harry would not want him Author's Response: That's exactly right, since little kids are excellent judges of character, mostly. And yes, Sev will try and forgive Tobias, for both of their sakes and Harry's. And the next chapter is up, Bren!
the talk...can't wait! Author's Response: Ha! I think I fooled a lot of you with that little trick... and I wasn't even really trying. LOL! And the talk has just been posted! By the way, thanks again for the banner, I'll b eposting it as soon as I answer all the reviews! You're wickedly awesome!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And I never thought about Harry and Samantha, great idea for maybe a sequel! And the new chapter has been posted!
Author's Response: Yes, I agree with you about too many of us letting things go until it's too late, sad really. And yes, matt does see his mother on holidays and such, they are no longer at odds. And Tobias has finally learned his lesson and will give up drinking for good and all. But he has yet to convince Severus of his sincerity. That's covered in the next chapter, which has been posted just now!
Author's Response: No Lucius was not following them, only poor lonely Tobias. But Lucius will make a repeat appearance towards the end of the book, so be warned!
I hope Sev will be able to get all his frustrations and anger out of his system in their next talk - he'll need that to come a little closer in reconciling with his father. Author's Response: Yes he will, and you'll be surprised at what Severus demands of him in the next chapter, which I've jsut posted. And I agree with you about Toby, you really can't help but feel sorry for him, even though he did it to himself, it's the addiction which drives him to keep harming himself. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! I love writing Harry as a little kid, he's really fun to put in different situations. As for Sev OOC-ness, I know he's not the typical snarky Potions professor we all know and loved, but this is AU and he never had to become a spy here, since Voldy died forever in the first war, and in this universe he was actually friends with James, Sirius, and Remus and Lily too, of course! So if he seems a lot nicer and more mellow, well that's what having good friends and a profession you enjoy does to you. Of course, he does still have a strict sarcastic side, but it only relaly show when he deals with Tobias. And he loves Harry to pieces here, who wouldn't? Glad you're enjoying this!
Great chapter. You had me thinking...Lucius - ruddy - Malfoy is going to kidnap Harry! Goodness... noticed you had planted that in my head right at the beginning with anti - kidnapping spell etc... *Evil Author!* Look forward to more! Author's Response: ha! I seem to have caught a lot of people with my little unintended joke. Honsetly, I never thought people would think it was Malfoy until I read my reviews, I just didn't want to give away the fact that it was Tobias until the end of the chapter. Maybe I AM evil! Just a little. Thanks for reviewing and I've updated! |
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