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Title: Last Chance 08 May 2008 10:47 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Holy Cow! Great Chapter again!!

    Author's Response: Thank you! It was a pretty difficult chapter to write, very emotional and the next one was even more so!
Title: Last Chance 29 Apr 2008 8:01 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Last Chance 29 Apr 2008 1:56 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! What a chapter! Go Sev! I hope after Tobias experiences what Severus went through, he'll change for good and all. Please update soon!

    Author's Response: I will and I hope you enjoy the next chapter--it's very angsty!
Title: Last Chance 29 Apr 2008 1:52 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    oh boy, you nearly made me cry with this chapter! It was excellent! I can't wait for the next one! Poor Sev!

    Author's Response: Yes, poor Sev indeed! And just wait till you see what else happens!
Title: Last Chance 29 Apr 2008 12:07 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, now that tobias and severus are talking i hope they can put the past behind them and try and start again, i hope tobias also realises what he has done while under legilemens, keep writing

    Author's Response: Yes, eventually Tobias will come to a sudden realization of just how much he hurt Severus.  He's almost there now, but this legilimens thing is going to hit him hard and push him all the way, and once he realizes that, both of them can begin to heal.
Title: Last Chance 28 Apr 2008 9:16 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, my God! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    I'm sorry I didn't review you last chapter, but I got really busy over the weekend. (Like two 14 hour day's at work)

    Anyway, I loved both chapters. Matt's insight was interesting. In all honesty, though I'm not sure it was necessary. I was a little afraid when you announced that Matt and Sev would have a conversation. I had this image of who was abused more contest, but it didn't turn out that way at all. I think the idea of having Tobias follow them would have been a little more...meaningful if Sev had come to the realization he did with Matt while merely watching Harry from a distance. At the same time Tobias could have been watching as well and come to a small realization of some sort to. *shruggs* thats just me and regaurdless it was a wonderful chapter.

    This chapter is one I've been looking forward to for some time and I wasn't disappionted...until I came to the end and couldn't hit the 'Next' button. Please update soon.

    This may seem a little strange, but I really do hope you have Tobias cry in the next chapter. I think its necessary for both Tobias and Severus. Severus needs to see his father cry so that little voice in head (that he can't quite get rid of thanks to his abusive father) will him that its okay for him to cry. He seems to think that already but I'm sure he has doubts. (I only say this because you've mentioned the crying thing several times) Tobias needs to cry to over come the whole mentality and show Severus he's sorry.

    Great chapter, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next! Please update soon.

    Author's Response:

    I wanted to put in some more about Matt's past to flesh him out as a character and also to provide a support base for Severus, he needs someone he can confide in.  So that's why the conversation.

    Now, the big emotional chapter is next and it's giving me goosebumps trying to write it.  I'm probably going to end up bawling my eyes out by the time I'm done with it.  The whole idea about Tobias crying is a good one and I was planning on that happening anyway.  It'll be the final irrevocable proof that Tobias has truly changed, because  the old Tobias would've never become so vulnerable.  And then Severus could cry also, because the two of them need some emotional catharsis. 

    So, I'm off to write and thanks for reviewing!

Title: Last Chance 28 Apr 2008 7:15 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, and interesting idea to use a kind of pensieve spell! I am really eager to see Tobias' reaction in the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Oh boy and you'll be seeing it! After you've done the flashbacks along with him though, which should be very emotional...to write as well as to read, God help me!
Title: Last Chance 28 Apr 2008 3:18 pm
Reviewer: brenda wood (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow

    i think sev is being a bit harsh but then - he is also not used to examining his own weakness and to trusting someone with harry....

    Author's Response: Yes, well, he has his son to think of and he is alos carrying around years worth of repressed anger and resentment, so it's only natural that he wants tangible proof that Tobias has changed for good.  As he says words are not enough. 
Title: Last Chance 28 Apr 2008 9:30 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    I cant tell you how much I love your story. My father was a lot like Tobias. But he never hit me only my sister. My Mother left him before he got to me. I read your story and see what happened to my sister but my father stopped with me. He treated ME great but my sister still feel what he did to them.

    I really love your story and hope you keep it up I will read it now matter what.

    Author's Response: Oh my goodness! I can't tell you how moving that is to have you say that . . .and how sorry I am that such an awful thing happened to your sister.  I too had an alcoholic in my family, though he never did anything to me, he did plenty to MY sister and her kids, before he finally sobered up.  Tobias is based a heck of a lot on him.  Hopefully, you will like the ending I've got planned, though there is some major drama coming up.  Thank you very much for reviewing and I'm honored that my story touched you so deeply.
Title: Last Chance 28 Apr 2008 9:10 am
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Couldn't bother to sign in) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh... Sev turning Tobias into a human torch... interesting. yeah, I'ld probably be a little scared out of my wits too! I was half suspecting Tobias would hum and har over it for a little longer before making the decision. Great. :) Want more!

    Author's Response:

    Well, Sev didn't give him much choice, it was either his way or the highway, so faced with that, Tobias gave in.  Hopefully I'll have the next chapter done by tonight.


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