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Reviews For Never Again!
Author's Response: Thank you! It was a pretty difficult chapter to write, very emotional and the next one was even more so!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: I will and I hope you enjoy the next chapter--it's very angsty!
Author's Response: Yes, poor Sev indeed! And just wait till you see what else happens!
Author's Response: Yes, eventually Tobias will come to a sudden realization of just how much he hurt Severus. He's almost there now, but this legilimens thing is going to hit him hard and push him all the way, and once he realizes that, both of them can begin to heal.
I'm sorry I didn't review you last chapter, but I got really busy over the weekend. (Like two 14 hour day's at work) Anyway, I loved both chapters. Matt's insight was interesting. In all honesty, though I'm not sure it was necessary. I was a little afraid when you announced that Matt and Sev would have a conversation. I had this image of who was abused more contest, but it didn't turn out that way at all. I think the idea of having Tobias follow them would have been a little more...meaningful if Sev had come to the realization he did with Matt while merely watching Harry from a distance. At the same time Tobias could have been watching as well and come to a small realization of some sort to. *shruggs* thats just me and regaurdless it was a wonderful chapter. This chapter is one I've been looking forward to for some time and I wasn't disappionted...until I came to the end and couldn't hit the 'Next' button. Please update soon. This may seem a little strange, but I really do hope you have Tobias cry in the next chapter. I think its necessary for both Tobias and Severus. Severus needs to see his father cry so that little voice in head (that he can't quite get rid of thanks to his abusive father) will him that its okay for him to cry. He seems to think that already but I'm sure he has doubts. (I only say this because you've mentioned the crying thing several times) Tobias needs to cry to over come the whole mentality and show Severus he's sorry. Great chapter, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next! Please update soon. Author's Response: I wanted to put in some more about Matt's past to flesh him out as a character and also to provide a support base for Severus, he needs someone he can confide in. So that's why the conversation. Now, the big emotional chapter is next and it's giving me goosebumps trying to write it. I'm probably going to end up bawling my eyes out by the time I'm done with it. The whole idea about Tobias crying is a good one and I was planning on that happening anyway. It'll be the final irrevocable proof that Tobias has truly changed, because the old Tobias would've never become so vulnerable. And then Severus could cry also, because the two of them need some emotional catharsis. So, I'm off to write and thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Oh boy and you'll be seeing it! After you've done the flashbacks along with him though, which should be very emotional...to write as well as to read, God help me!
i think sev is being a bit harsh but then - he is also not used to examining his own weakness and to trusting someone with harry.... Author's Response: Yes, well, he has his son to think of and he is alos carrying around years worth of repressed anger and resentment, so it's only natural that he wants tangible proof that Tobias has changed for good. As he says words are not enough.
I really love your story and hope you keep it up I will read it now matter what. Author's Response: Oh my goodness! I can't tell you how moving that is to have you say that . . .and how sorry I am that such an awful thing happened to your sister. I too had an alcoholic in my family, though he never did anything to me, he did plenty to MY sister and her kids, before he finally sobered up. Tobias is based a heck of a lot on him. Hopefully, you will like the ending I've got planned, though there is some major drama coming up. Thank you very much for reviewing and I'm honored that my story touched you so deeply.
Author's Response: Well, Sev didn't give him much choice, it was either his way or the highway, so faced with that, Tobias gave in. Hopefully I'll have the next chapter done by tonight. |
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