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Reviews For Never Again!
i hope the aurors prove useful in the next chapter, otherwise i'm sacking them Author's Response: The Aurors will be in the next chapter, though not as much as you'd think. And I loved the fishing trip too and tickling Harry was very evil-haha! But it worked!
Author's Response: Thank you, I try to keep it as authentic as I can, but sometimes I'll make a mistake because I'm an American and don't know some details, but spelling I do know, since I'm a former English teacher.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying this, but I didn't know about the poison ivy bit, I'm from New Jersey, so I might give a short explanation about why it was there, since I don't want to have to alter that whole scene--it's too cute. Thank you for the information.
Author's Response: Yes, that was one of my faves too--and something that was totally unplanned, by the way!
Although realistically I the homework you had for Harry was way too advanced for a six year old at the beginning of the year! (Sorry I'm picky..) I like the fluff in the chapter. Author's Response: Kids really are hilarious, and sometimes the things they come up with! Too funny! You're right about the homework though, don't know what I was thinking, I used to teach preschool too! I'll go back and change it to something more appropriate, thanks for pointing it out to me.
And yeah, I am 100% positive that principal is a purely American thing. They are never principals in the UK, just Headmasters and Headmistresses. Author's Response: This harry is based upon several of my nephews when they were that age--they are all much older now, but I still remember most of what they did and how they acted, since I used to watch them nearly every day. And I like this Tobias better than my original idea, which was to have be the typical nasty abusive man. And my updates....I write very very quickly, and don't ask me how I do it, either, but once I have something in my head it won't let me go until I'm done. And I can translate my ideas into words and scenes very easily, it's very weird, I can't really explain it, but once I sit down and start writing, I see an image in my head and somehow I know how to write it. I write at night, usually, and I can type somewhere around 350 WPM, so that helps too. People ask me all the time, how did you do that so fast? I don't know, I just do. And thanks for the tip about the Headmaster, I'll fix it in the chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you like what comes after it!
Wonderful chapter! Author's Response: Thanks and the minnow thing was another improv, I didn't even think of it till I was writing that scene down, and then it just came to me. I'm so weird that way. LOL!
I like that Tobias very subtly is telling Sev that he thinks that he is a great healer hinting his pride Author's Response: Yeah I liked this scene, it provides some great moments for all three of them, before the bad thing that happens in the next chapter. |
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