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Reviews For Never Again!
Author's Response: Okay, but my dad is Italian too, born and raised in Calabria and he said that Capice is a dialect and it was all right to use it. Anyway, it's a minor point, what I was really interested in was how you liked the rest of the chapter and the story.
Author's Response: I know, the ending of this was meant to be a cliffhanger and it really slams you one when you read it for the first time.
Author's Response: Yes, you're right, I had changed it in the original and thought I'd fixed it here, but I guess not, so thanks for reminding me.
Author's Response: Thanks and you'll see what happens to Tobias in the next chapter!
Oh no! What IS it with those stink'n creeps and attacking on Halloween?! That battle scene was written amazingly well. You used great detail so I could clearly picture the entire thing in my mind. Some very interesting spells too, and 'the wrath of Dumbledore' was awesome! You really had me worried that poor Harry was going to get kidnapped, it's a good thing Moony and Padfoot showed up with Dumbledore. I really hope Tobias is alright, because I've gotten to like the character and Sev and Harry would be heartbroken! Off to read and reveiw your next chapter! P.S. When I read that Lucius was shot, one of the first things that came to mind was 'The Wicked Witch is dead!' song from Wizard of Oz, lol. Only I guess it'd have to be 'The Wicked Wizard' instead, hehe. Author's Response: Ha! That's really funny! And I thought the same thing, in fact I use references to the Wizard of Oz a lot in my Snape fics, there's another one posted here Some Good Guys Wear Black that has a quote and a scene where Harry, Ginny & Sev watch the movie together. It's one of my favorite movies. Hope you like what happens next & thanks for reviewing!
Haha, though, no real Italian people use capice at the end of sentences like the Americans portray them as doing. ;) Author's Response: Yeah, I know, but I put it in there because it was funny! Glad you liked it and I've just posted a new chapter too!
Author's Response: Sorry, but you can read the new update, it should be posted now! :)
Author's Response: You're going to have to wait till the next update to find out what happens to Tobias. But I'm glad you like him now, he grows on you, doesn't he!
Author's Response: Thanks and you'll find out whether Tobias is dead or alive come the next chapter. Yes, I know, I'm too cruel!
Author's Response: Thanks and the next chapter should be up very soon! |
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