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Title: United We Stand 11 Jul 2009 12:22 am
Reviewer: GRIFFINDORLADY (Anonymous) [Report This]
    SORRY BUT YOU'RE MISTAKEN WHIT THE CAPICE ITALIAN FOR UNDERSTAND, BECAUSE IS NOT LIKE IT THE RIGHT TRANSLATION BUT IS CAPITO !! MY MOTHER TONGUE IS ITALIAN SO I'M SURE OF IT !

    Author's Response:

    Okay, but my dad is Italian too, born and raised in Calabria and he said that Capice is a dialect and it was all right to use it.

    Anyway, it's a minor point, what I was really interested in was how you liked the rest of the chapter and the story.

Title: United We Stand 09 May 2008 6:38 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter, the beginning was sweet. The ending heart wrenching!

    Author's Response:

    I know, the ending of this was meant to be a cliffhanger and it really slams you one when you read it for the first time.

Title: United We Stand 04 May 2008 9:29 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Actually, when Harry uses his magic against the Death Eater, your story should read "..for the THIRD time in his life, his magic responded to his need..", since the very first time we readers know of it is when he helps his father become conscious again. His shield against the Doberman is actually the second time, rather than the first.

    Author's Response: Yes, you're right, I had changed it in the original and thought I'd fixed it here, but I guess not, so thanks for reminding me. 
Title: United We Stand 02 May 2008 6:07 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    what a great chapter and a good fight, go sev, harry, tobias and the order, the death eaters never stood a chance and i hope tobias recovers from his injuries

    Author's Response: Thanks and you'll see what happens to Tobias in the next chapter!
Title: United We Stand 02 May 2008 6:07 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Checked my updates and discovered you posted another two chapters, sweet! lol.

    Oh no! What IS it with those stink'n creeps and attacking on Halloween?! That battle scene was written amazingly well. You used great detail so I could clearly picture the entire thing in my mind. Some very interesting spells too, and 'the wrath of Dumbledore' was awesome! You really had me worried that poor Harry was going to get kidnapped, it's a good thing Moony and Padfoot showed up with Dumbledore.

    I really hope Tobias is alright, because I've gotten to like the character and Sev and Harry would be heartbroken!

    Off to read and reveiw your next chapter!

    P.S. When I read that Lucius was shot, one of the first things that came to mind was 'The Wicked Witch is dead!' song from Wizard of Oz, lol. Only I guess it'd have to be 'The Wicked Wizard' instead, hehe.

    Author's Response:

    Ha! That's really funny! And I thought the same thing, in fact I use references to the Wizard of Oz a lot in my Snape fics, there's another one posted here Some Good Guys Wear Black that has a quote and a scene where Harry, Ginny & Sev watch the movie together.  It's one of my favorite movies.  Hope you like what happens next & thanks for reviewing!

Title: United We Stand 02 May 2008 2:36 am
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]
    Wooo! I love each and every one of your chapters. They're great and Harry is adorable. This was an exciting one!

    Haha, though, no real Italian people use capice at the end of sentences like the Americans portray them as doing. ;)

    Author's Response: Yeah, I know, but I put it in there because it was funny! Glad you liked it and I've just posted a new chapter too!
Title: United We Stand 02 May 2008 1:46 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    noooooooo! not a cliff hanger! anything but that!

    Author's Response: Sorry, but you can read the new update, it should be posted now! :)
Title: United We Stand 01 May 2008 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    What an awesome chapter, I love the way you had all of them fight the DE's. But please tell me Tobias doesn't die, at first I didn't care for him that much but now I love him!

    Author's Response: You're going to have to wait till the next update to find out what happens to Tobias.  But I'm glad you like him now, he grows on you, doesn't he!
Title: United We Stand 01 May 2008 9:43 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh my God! Please say he isn't dead! Please! Other than that this was an incredible chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks and you'll find out whether Tobias is dead or alive come the next chapter.  Yes, I know, I'm too cruel!
Title: United We Stand 01 May 2008 8:27 pm
Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice (long) update. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: Thanks and the next chapter should be up very soon!

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