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Reviews For Never Again!
now what happens when they are all at home together? will sev get a date with amy - christmas is coming you know Author's Response: Thanks, Bren! You'll see, Sev & Toby finally iron out their differences and as for Sev dating well . . .they discuss that as well.
Glad Tobias is better, and I hope he and Sev can bond a bit more in the last chapter. Author's Response: Yes, the last chapter will see the final reconciliation between the two, and I'm glad you're not torturing me! LOL!
Author's Response: Tobias will manage that when at Sev's because Severus has no alcohol in his house and Tobias has promised himself that he will never drink again, otherwise the family will split apart and he's not about to risk that.
Author's Response: Thanks and you'll see what happens to Tobias in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Me too! Did you REALLY think I would kill him? Shame on you! LOL! Thanks for the review! :)
Author's Response: Aww! You're awesome too! Get ready for the finale though!
The spell used against Tobias was very creative, and also deadly. Makes me wonder whom came up with it? I found the 'breakfast disaster' to be really funny, I can just imagine something like that happening! At least they didn't try to make pancakes, can you imagine the horror? Batter EVERYWHER! lol. I really liked the ending of this chapter, it is very reflective. I'm looking forward to reading more of your wonderful chapters, so keep those updates flowing! Your really great with that. Author's Response: Yes, it would have--they'd have been devastated. As for that spell, we'll never know who created or cast it, because the DE that did it is now dead. (Harry killed him accidentally). Ah the perils of having people who can't cook in your kitchen--yes pancakes would've been an utter disaster, but hilarious. And there's more to come!
Oh no! What IS it with those stink'n creeps and attacking on Halloween?! That battle scene was written amazingly well. You used great detail so I could clearly picture the entire thing in my mind. Some very interesting spells too, and 'the wrath of Dumbledore' was awesome! You really had me worried that poor Harry was going to get kidnapped, it's a good thing Moony and Padfoot showed up with Dumbledore. I really hope Tobias is alright, because I've gotten to like the character and Sev and Harry would be heartbroken! Off to read and reveiw your next chapter! P.S. When I read that Lucius was shot, one of the first things that came to mind was 'The Wicked Witch is dead!' song from Wizard of Oz, lol. Only I guess it'd have to be 'The Wicked Wizard' instead, hehe. Author's Response: Ha! That's really funny! And I thought the same thing, in fact I use references to the Wizard of Oz a lot in my Snape fics, there's another one posted here Some Good Guys Wear Black that has a quote and a scene where Harry, Ginny & Sev watch the movie together. It's one of my favorite movies. Hope you like what happens next & thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Now would I do that? I'm not THAT cruel! And yes, Tobias will be making a full recovery, thanks to his Healer son! Yay! Go Sev!
Love that Sev healed his dad; in a previous chapter when Tobias agreed with Harry about Sev being the best healer at St. Mungos, Sev replied ‘How would you know, Dad?’ well now Tobias can say it with pride and Sev will know that his dad really meant it. Author's Response: They sure did and yes, now Tobias truly knows just how good his son is and can be proud of him as a man and a doctor. It's a turning point in their relationship, and it can only get better from here. |
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