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Reviews For Never Again!
I love it. Excellent chapter. Tobias argueing with the intern and then with Sev was wonderful. I would have liked to have seen a seen with him and Matt in physical therapy. That stuff can be brutal and I can only imagine how Tobias would handle it. Amazing chapter and I can't wait for the next. Author's Response: Yay! You know, I never thought about a physical therapy scene, guess 'cause I was focusing on Sev &Tobias so much. But you're right, Tobias would've probably been able to handle it pretty well, considering he's a tough old snake!
Author's Response: So am I. cause I just couldn't bear to have Tobias die. And the breakfast was something I hadn't planned on doing, but while I was writing, it came to me. I seem to have some of my best ideas by improvisation. Thanks for the review and I hope you like the finish! :)
Haha, though, no real Italian people use capice at the end of sentences like the Americans portray them as doing. ;) Author's Response: Yeah, I know, but I put it in there because it was funny! Glad you liked it and I've just posted a new chapter too!
Author's Response: I know, I feel sad, but maybe I'll do a sequel, if anyone wants one! And yeah, Sev loved being able to tell Toby what to do for once!
Author's Response: Sorry, but you can read the new update, it should be posted now! :)
Author's Response: You're going to have to wait till the next update to find out what happens to Tobias. But I'm glad you like him now, he grows on you, doesn't he!
Author's Response: Thanks and you'll find out whether Tobias is dead or alive come the next chapter. Yes, I know, I'm too cruel!
Author's Response: Thanks and the next chapter should be up very soon!
Author's Response: I will tonight! If you can bear the suspense!
Author's Response: Yeah, this was one of my fav's to write! I love giving the family moments like that to bond. |
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