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Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 4:42 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    That was good! thanks for another chapter so soon after the last one! I'm really curious to see Severus' reaction to the "new" Tobias when he awakes...

    Author's Response: Oh, you'll be seeing it all right! 
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 4:27 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    It's intersting to see Tobias being nice for a change. I wonder if Sev will ever forgive his father after he realizes the man can be nice. Excellent chapter as usual and also- Happy Birthday! :)

    Author's Response: Sev may or may not forgive him, remember he has a lot of emotional trauma to work through since Tobias hurt him very badly.
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 3:13 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story... Harry love heals both his father and his grandfather of what ails them

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY hope you get whatever you desire

    Author's Response: Yes, love really is the most powerful form of magic.  Thanks very much!
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 2:33 am
Reviewer: PyroChilde (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter. You really write Tobias wonderfully. He isn't just some cardboard cutout, he actually seems human and had emotional depth. I love that he's looking back on his son's childhood with regrets and trying to do better with Harry. I love your last sentence too! Can't wait for Sev to wake up and to see the fall out!
    ~Brandi~

    Author's Response: Thanks so much, Tobias was a difficult character for me to write because I wasn't sure how to portray him at first, and then I finally got the idea to just make him a man who had a lot of problems and was just beginning to realize the mistakes he had made and how he didn't want to repeat them with his grandson.  I love writing stoies with redemptive themes, because I believe that everyone deserves a second chance if they want it.
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 1:50 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant - I really like the bit about what Harry's done, and how he and Tobias keep bonding. It's going to be great to see Severus back; I can't wait to see his reaction.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I hope you like the way Sev reacts in the next chapter!
Title: Two Steps Forward 19 Apr 2008 1:07 am
Reviewer: Wolverine (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this chapter. I like how Tobias and Harry's relationship has changed. By the way Happy Birthday. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry and Tobias's elationship has taken a turn for the better, though there will still be rocky points in the future, as you'll see. Thanks!
Title: Two Steps Forward 18 Apr 2008 11:24 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw this was such a sweet chapter, I loved it, all of it! Can't wait for the next one. Severus wakes up! Oh and have a very happy birthday!

    Author's Response:

    I'm happy you liked it, thanks so much for reviewing!

Title: Two Steps Forward 18 Apr 2008 11:14 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    yay! I'm so glad to see that they're getting along and I loved the scene with Sev and Matthew and Harry in the hospital. It's amazinf what a son's love can do, isn't it!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it certainly is !

Title: Two Steps Forward 18 Apr 2008 11:10 pm
Reviewer: brenda-wood (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG

    you cannot leave me hanging there

    this was amazing and I love how everyone is growing

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY

    Hugs

    Bren

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I've just finished writing the next chapter, I should be posting it soon, after I eat my cake & open presents!
Title: Two Steps Forward 18 Apr 2008 8:16 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *squeals* can't wait...it's amazing what a son's love can do. can't wait for severus to come back

    Author's Response: It certainly is! And I'm writing about Sev waking up right now, yay!

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