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Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 05 May 2008 12:26 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great fic, Snapegirl! I finally go to read it. I enjoyed your characterization of Tobias. I haven't read much with him so it was nice to have a chance to and I liked Harry and Severus as father and son. They are very sweet. Wonderful job and thanks for sharing that with us.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much and I'm glad you finally got to finsih this, I know you've been busy with your own story.  I'm probably going to do a sequel to this one too, so stayed tuned and I'll let you know when I've posted the new one.
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 05 May 2008 12:16 am
Reviewer: Eve (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please write a sequel, I would love it. Also, could you please update hide yourself from a prisoner!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I will.  Prisoner is finished, you know, but I am definitely planning a sequel to that called Hide Yourself Down in the Bayou--it takes place in the summer in New Orleans, though I'm not sure yet which I'm going to start first, that one or this sequel.  Depends on what flows faster in my head. 
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 05 May 2008 12:05 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Congratulations on finishing another story! What I liked best about this story was little Harry's voice. You kept him consistently six-years-old, and continued expanding on writing about the 'simple stuff' (which is my absolute favorite). I feel like you improved in writing his character as the story progressed, and it seemed as if you got a grasp on his little boy psyche a few chapters in and kept exploring it :)

    A sequel would be fun; however, I can't help but request a follow-up story in the first-person perspective of li'l Harry. I really loved how you wrote the sequel of SGGWB, and I think it would be neat to see you really climb into Harry's brain as a six-year-old and explore his dad's and grandpa's growing relationship, as you seemed to delve into his thoughts very well. Of course, you're probably already working on your sequel, considering your posting speed, but I can always hope, right? :)

    Good story; keep writing.

    Author's Response:

    Really glad you liked this one and I haven't started actually writing the sequel yet, just exploring ideas and getting a feel for how the next story is going to flow.  I hadn't thought about doing another first person, but maybe I could do two separate POV's, Harry's and Sev's like I did for Someone To Watch Over Me.  Any how thatnks for all your reviews and ideas and I'll let you know when the sequel's posted. 

Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 04 May 2008 9:14 pm
Reviewer: Madison (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I would definitely read a sequel if you wrote one..Great story :)

    Author's Response: Thank you and I'm already plotting one!
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 04 May 2008 7:55 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    A very good story from start to finish and I would totally love a sequel.

    Author's Response: Thank you and I will be working on one soon!
Title: Where Do We Go From Here? 04 May 2008 7:49 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks and hope you like the end!
Title: United We Stand 04 May 2008 9:29 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Actually, when Harry uses his magic against the Death Eater, your story should read "..for the THIRD time in his life, his magic responded to his need..", since the very first time we readers know of it is when he helps his father become conscious again. His shield against the Doberman is actually the second time, rather than the first.

    Author's Response: Yes, you're right, I had changed it in the original and thought I'd fixed it here, but I guess not, so thanks for reminding me. 
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 04 May 2008 9:21 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Most enjoyable story! And a very funny ending! Loved it!!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm really glad you liked it! And thanks for pointing out those corrections too, I try and proofread as much as possible, but sometimes I miss stuff.
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 04 May 2008 4:15 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

    I loved this chapter it really wrapped everthing up well. Your entire story was wonderful and amazing and...I loved it.

    If you did do a sequel what would it be about? Would Harry still be small or a teenager? I can just see a teenage Harry getting in a fight with his dad and running away to grandpa's house.

    Anyway, excellent story. I loved every chapter of it!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I've some ideas for a sequel with a still small Harry that I emailed you! So let me know what you think of them.  I could probably do a trilogy, or a series, depending on what ideas get into my brain.  Who knows? 
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 04 May 2008 3:47 am
Reviewer: Ali (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really enjoyed reading this fic.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much, glad to hear it!

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