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Reviews For Never Again!
Author's Response: A lot of people want to see what happens with Inky and actually I want to as well. I think it'd be interesting to see how the family deals with a young panther cub. Sev's gonna have kittens! LOL! And you're right, no one has realized yet that Harry played a monumental role in waking Severus from the coma. Definite room for a sequel! Thanks so much for R&Ring!
A wonderful journey! :) Kylie Author's Response: So did I, which was why I gave Harry one! I used to want to be a lion tamer when I was six. And I think it would be mean if Sev transfigured Inky back to a toy, it's much better to have an alive panther cub! Thanks for all your reviews!
sev dates and harry and tobias and all are involved to some degree Author's Response: Yeah, that's what I was thinking too or something along those lines. I love a good romance with some action mixed in and Harry's the mischievous imp so you just know something's going to happen that's wild and unpredictable.
Have a chocolate frog and a crate of butterbeer for all your hard work Author's Response: Thanks and I will! Yum! And I have ideas floating around for a sequel already!
Author's Response: You are so very welcome and I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
However, in the first paragraph of the 2nd section here, you wrote: "...the paperwork that had mounted up while he was in a coma for over two months." This jars the reader, since it doesn't match with the "three" we remember. Feel sorry for poor old Toby--I know he didn't mean to screw up like that. Author's Response: Whoops, you're right, I'd forgotten to adjust that. When I first started this, I wasn't sure how long I was going to have Sev remain in a coma, and was waffling inbetween a little over two months to three and finally decided to go with three. Thanks for reminding me.
Author's Response: Awww! I love it when people cry over my writing, because it shows that I've touched the right emotional chords and that's what I'm aiming for. So thanks and there're more part where you'll need Kleenex, LOL. This was a very emotional story for me to write.
Author's Response: Thank you and I hated to see it end too. But . . .I could very easily do a sequel. And probably will!
Thank you for a great story. Keep writing Author's Response: Aww! Thanks so much, you've been a great reviewer and I loved reading all your comments!
Author's Response: Thank you and you've no idea how marvelous it is to read all these wonderful reviews! Hope you'll continue to read more of my work, I have more posted up here. |
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