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Reviews For Never Again!
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 04 May 2008 3:06 am
Reviewer: Ladynight (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this story from the first chapter. I would love to see a sequel, if only to see what happens with the now 'alive' Inky. Plus it'd be nice to see if they ever figure out it was harry that woke Severus.

    Author's Response: A lot of people want to see what happens with Inky and actually I want to as well.  I think it'd be interesting to see how the family deals with a young panther cub.  Sev's gonna have kittens! LOL! And you're right, no one has realized yet that Harry played a monumental role in waking Severus from the coma.  Definite room for a sequel!  Thanks so much for R&Ring! 
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 04 May 2008 3:03 am
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Couldn't bother to sign in) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolutely wonderful. Loved the fluff! ending. I wonder if Sev will let Harry keep alive Inky. I always wanted a live big cat as a kid!

    A wonderful journey!

    :) Kylie

    Author's Response: So did I, which was why I gave Harry one! I used to want to be a lion tamer when I was six.  And I think it would be mean if Sev transfigured Inky back to a toy, it's much better to have an alive panther cub!  Thanks for all your reviews!
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 04 May 2008 12:23 am
Reviewer: brenda wood (Anonymous) [Report This]
    sequel sequel sequel

    sev dates and harry and tobias and all are involved to some degree

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, that's what I was thinking too or something along those lines.  I love a good romance with some action mixed in and Harry's the mischievous imp so you just know something's going to happen that's wild and unpredictable.

     

     

Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 03 May 2008 9:44 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    what a great ending and the show of love between father and son made me feel happy for them and please please please do a sequel, i don't know what i would do without tobias, sev and harry.

    Have a chocolate frog and a crate of butterbeer for all your hard work

    Author's Response: Thanks and I will! Yum! And I have ideas floating around for a sequel already!
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 03 May 2008 9:35 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Haha, what an end :) Thank you for writing this. Little sun

    Author's Response: You are so very welcome and I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
Title: Never Again 03 May 2008 9:30 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a terrific job you're doing with a wonderful story! I have only one small continuity problem to point out. Both in the previous and next chapters, you mention it's three months that Severus was in a coma.
    However, in the first paragraph of the 2nd section here, you wrote: "...the paperwork that had mounted up while he was in a coma for over two months."
    This jars the reader, since it doesn't match with the "three" we remember.
    Feel sorry for poor old Toby--I know he didn't mean to screw up like that.

    Author's Response: Whoops, you're right, I'd forgotten to adjust that.  When I first started this, I wasn't sure how long I was going to have Sev remain in a coma, and was waffling inbetween a little over two months to three and finally decided to go with three.  Thanks for reminding me.
Title: Two Steps Forward 03 May 2008 6:18 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter. Nice to see Tobias' changes, both within himself, and with Harry. And Harry's loving magic moved me to tears.

    Author's Response: Awww! I love it when people cry over my writing, because it shows that I've touched the right emotional chords and that's what I'm aiming for.  So thanks and there're more part where you'll need Kleenex, LOL.  This was a very emotional story for me to write.
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 03 May 2008 5:51 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hated to see it finish. Loved it and thought you did a great job resolving the conflict between Snape and his father. Yes more please!

    Author's Response: Thank you and I hated to see it end too.  But . . .I could very easily do a sequel.  And probably will!
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 03 May 2008 3:58 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it...perfect ending if I could give you an 11 rating I would.

    Thank you for a great story. Keep writing

    Author's Response: Aww! Thanks so much, you've been a great reviewer and I loved reading all your comments!  
Title: Understanding and Reconciliation 03 May 2008 3:47 pm
Reviewer: Kazza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A marvellous story! And with a great ending too. Thank you for the enjoyment you've given me with your story - it's a memorable experience in all the best ways.

    Author's Response: Thank you and you've no idea how marvelous it is to read all these wonderful reviews!  Hope you'll continue to read more of my work, I have more posted up here. 

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