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Reviews For Never Again!
Thanks Author's Response: Thanks very much and when I write a sequel, there will be more appearances by the other three, since this one focused mainly on the father-son relationship between Sev, Tobias & Harry.
Author's Response: Thanks very much and Harry gets into plenty of mischief and Severus might have a date looming on the horizon. :)
Author's Response: Ah, well that's my surprise ending!! LOL! So glad you really enjoyed it, I had great fun writing it, except for the really emotional parts.
Author's Response: Y'know, so would I! LOL! Thanks for reviewing :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much and I'm so happy you liked this one! I've got a few others posted if you want to read them too. :)
Michelle (Mitch) Author's Response: Wow! I must say I am honored to hear you say that you liked my work that much. I have been writing for many years now and have many novels that are unpublished and only recently discovered that you can post them on the web. Though FF is new to me, I only started writing it about a year ago, yet I find it addicting. I have 3 other stories posted here, and I've posted other Snape fics on Harrypotterfanfiction.com and also on FF.net. The ones on HPFF are under the same penname Snapegirl and the ones on FF.net are under snapegirlkmf. So if you'd like you may check them out as well. I've been in the market for a halfway decent agent for years, but I write for enjoyment and hope someday I will eventually get published. Thank you for your awesome review and I shall be working on a sequel soon!
I found it quite funny when Tobias was hinting at Sev to get a girlfriend, but Sev needs time. When he's ready, and finds the right person, then he'll know. It really would be tough for him to replace Lily, and hopefully Harry wouldn't get jealous, but those things happen. I really liked the scene where Tobias told Sev that he loved him and visa-versa. It really shows how much they have come along, and it's truly wonderful that they are finally a happy family. The whole scene was beautiful! I had to laugh at the ending, oh Harry, lol. I can only hope Inky didn't become life-sized! Never read 'The Velveteen Rabbit' but something tells me something similar happened in the book. Poor Sev, he really does have his work cut out for him, that Harry is full of surprises! Brilliant and beautiful story! I would absolutely LOVE it if you wrote a sequel! This story has earned a place in my favorites, it's written very well and I love your ideas. I've really enjoyed reading along with the relationship development, Tobias has really grown as a character and he and his family are finally mended. Please post a sequel, it would make me truly happy! ^^ Author's Response: Yes, you're right and if he does eventually date someone, it has to be someone who understands both him AND Harry and Tobias too. The reconciliation scene between Tobias and Sev was one of my favorite parts too, I adore happy endings, which is why most of my stories have them. As for Inky, if and when I write a sequel, you'll see what happens between them, it's been playing in my head and I would love to write more about Harry, Sev, & Tobias.
it is so strange that you got rid of voldemort and they aren't saying things like, "one day he will defeat lord voldemort" or some thing like that...it is kind of a nice change of pace! Author's Response: Yeah, it DID feel kind of weird, but so many stories follow canon with Voldemort that I thought it would be a nice change of pace to have Harry be a --sort-of normal six-year-old, and Sev be a Healer and Potions Master, with all the work/drama it entails. And yes, Sev is going to need all the help he can get!
Author's Response: Thanks so much and maybe I'll do so in a few weeks, when I finish fleshing out a new storyline!
Author's Response: You're very welcome! Hope you have fun tomorrow! |
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