I think I have read this a fanfiction.net, but there are only 3 chapters...hm...
Oh my. Poor Harry. I think my heart stopped for a moment when Snape hexed Kingsley. It just seemed so very wrong. (Yes, I am one of those who downright hated Book Six because of the way Snape was portrayed there.)
Therefore I'm even more thankful for your solution. That it wasn't him. Nevertheless, I don't really get what's wrong with Petunia. I mean, why does she know Snape this well? And how comes she absolutely hates him and doesn't fear him even a bit? I mean, if she knows him well, she just has to know that he's been a Deatheater and therefore can be quite dangerous for Muggles such as her. Could you explain?
Thanks a lot for this,
ai
| Title: Chapter 10 - Decisions.
| 23 Jul 2008 7:28 am
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| Reviewer: GoLd (Signed)
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LOve it! Needs a sequel!!
funny about hedwig being there, but i understand literary license and all that. i like your writing style, flowing and simple without sounds dumbed down or corny, a hard balance to get. seeing the summary gives me hopes for this story- i'm thinking it's a short, sweet, snarry story? i'll have to read to find out, i guess. :))
| Title: Chapter 10 - Decisions.
| 15 May 2008 7:57 am
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| Reviewer: tri-k (Anonymous)
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what kind of ending was that?!
i really liked the story so far and the direction seemed good for some harry-angst,but...then you end it like that! oh well i still enjoyed reading it.
You can't just leave it there!!!!! Brilliant story but I want more....it's not fair to leave it on such a cliffhanger!
Ah, now things are making sense. Glad to see that everything was Lucius' fault and that Severus isn't or wasn't just a heartless bastard. Also, interesting that Harry remembered what Severus did for him....if he did, why didn't he say anything previously? Or was he not aware of who did it, just that it had been done?
Wow! Completely not what I was expecting. The bit with Petunia was incredibly well-written. It was an interesting twist that it was she who came up with nick-name "Snivellus". It was a particularly vicious diatribe at an innocent Severus. Really wasn't expecting her to snap Severus' wand. Oh, and an interesting twist at the end as well!
That was intense and fast-paced, if a bit unsatisfying.
Your portrayal of Petunia bullying Snape was unusual for fanon but well within character range, well done.
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