Title: Snapshot Two - Later
| 03 Jun 2009 2:06 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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This is just wrong. Harry is showing signs of being an abused child, and Snape is the one abusing. I don't know how the other readers can see anything else.
Title: Snapshot Two - Later
| 30 Oct 2008 7:06 pm
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Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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So cute; His talk about the spanking then seeing reality was priceless.
It's quite nice. I hope you decide to write more soon.
Title: Snapshot Two - Later
| 10 Jul 2008 4:15 am
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Reviewer: jen77 (Anonymous)
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awww! Cute story. so many possibilities. What if Snape and Harry had come together first year...harry might have learned olcummency and more.
Title: Snapshot Two - Later
| 14 Jun 2008 12:55 am
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Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous)
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I give you 10 stars for this and two thumbs up. This is the first spanking story that I've actually enjoyed (I've read quite a few.) Normally stories with corporal punishment bug me to no end, but this was so uniquely and perfectly done, that I just can't stop reading. I also like how you tied both chapters together with the reference to a teddy bear. Update again when you get a chance please.
Title: Snapshot Two - Later
| 02 May 2008 11:02 pm
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Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous)
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A very nice follow up from the spanking scene,I am eagerly awaiting more.
awww that was so cute. Poor Harry he really needs to have some decent human contact and love. The poor kid thinks that getting punished is worth it for the cuddles and contact afterwards. That's not right he really does need a teddy bear, or maybe a dragon. Awesome chapter, it's going really great can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES
Again, I just love how Harry overdramatizes the spanking...grimacing with every step...figuring he won't be able to sit for weeks. And then alas, he looks in the mirror to find that his rear end is barely pink. LOL. I enjoy reading this childish version of eleven year old Harry. Just makes me smile :)
Great job on this chapter, I kept checking for updates! I want to give Harry a teddy bear SOOO bad, the poor little thing. But I don't have a teddy bear, (sob) lol. Good job please update again soon!!
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