Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For The Teddy Bear
Title: Snapshot One - The Teddy Bear 16 Jun 2009 11:25 pm
Reviewer: GRIFFINDORLADY (Signed) [Report This]
    wanderful!i'd been reading this story twice and i can't stand without readyng the 6chapter and the follower so please continue this story, i'm curious!lol
    ps.my mother tongue isn't english so please excuse my grammar mistakes!!!!!
Title: Snapshot Five - Hedwig 05 Jun 2009 2:08 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    aww!! so cute! I thought it was funny that Snape threatened to spank dumbly. he should have gone through on it =P. No, but in all seriousness, it was really cute.
Title: Snapshot Five - Hedwig 04 Jun 2009 3:20 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is awesome. I hope you update more often. I hope Harry does get a teddy bear. Is this going to be a guardian fic where Harry is taken from the Dursleys? Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Title: Snapshot Five - Hedwig 03 Jun 2009 6:06 pm
Reviewer: Bibi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've just started to read your stories...they're great!! Are you going to continue "The Painful Guardianship"??
Title: Snapshot Five - Hedwig 03 Jun 2009 3:44 am
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ha! so like an 11 year old not to think of the EASY solution to the problem. I liked Snape threatening to spank Dumbledore, LOL!
Title: Snapshot Five - Hedwig 03 Jun 2009 2:08 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ugh.

    Author's Response:

    If you didn't like it, why had you read all the chapters up to number 5? LOLL seems you were enjoying yourself afterall.

Title: Snapshot Four - Would You Sir? 03 Jun 2009 2:07 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This gets worse and worse.
Title: Snapshot Two - Later 03 Jun 2009 2:06 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is just wrong. Harry is showing signs of being an abused child, and Snape is the one abusing. I don't know how the other readers can see anything else.
Title: Snapshot One - The Teddy Bear 03 Jun 2009 2:05 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Didn't like.
Title: Snapshot Three - Quidditch 03 Jun 2009 2:04 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm sorry, but all the scenarios I've read in this fic are offensive and abusive, not cute as other commentors have said. Comforting an injured child after you beat him is just psychological torture. This Snape is playing mind games with Harry, and seems to border on sociopathic. Won't be reading more.

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