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Title: Chapter 6: Deflation 28 May 2008 6:06 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Damn, this chapter was good. You threw my emotions into the blender and chopped them all up. Of course, I loved the scene between Harry and Severus, because I'm a sucker for Sev being all dad-like and stern and concerned. But you knew that, right?

    I thought Harry's contradictions and moodiness was very spot-on for a boy his age, but now you've got me all worried by that last scene... Voldemort's supposed to be dead!!! Who could be tormenting him? Who?! I got chills when you slapped me in the face with that scene. Here I was, all warm and cozy from the previous scene between Ginny and Harry and then BAM. Right in my face.

    Brilliant final scene, though.

    Now, I'm officially dying to find out what happens next. But, pshht, you wrote over 10,000 words, so I guess that pretty much excuses you from updating for a while. LOL.

    By the way, I adore how you describe Harry's emotions--confusion, embarassment. I can feel what *he* feels. It's awesome.

    Sorry for the short review. I'm having the week from hell. Just know I adored this like mad.

    Author's Response:

    Well first of all, I'm sorry you're having a bad week.  And I never emailed you back.  Sorry.  :o( 

    I'm glad you liked the chapter though and don't worry about a short review.  I love them all.  Harry is definitely full of contradicting emotions and he is pretty moody.  LOL  And yep, Voldy is dead.  Hmm...very suspicious I suppose.  Why is Harry screaming then?  All very confusing.  LOL  

    I enjoyed the Sev/harry moments here.  No fluff.  LOL 

    It won't be quick for an update.  And yep, this was actually my longest chapter yet.  Whew.  

    Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter.  Hope you're week gets better.  :o) 

Title: Chapter 6: Deflation 28 May 2008 5:40 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, you just had to ruin the happiness moment.

    People tend to forget that Harry is still a boy. After all he has been through, it would be amazing if he didn't bask in some of the glory.

    I am sure that his friends and Severus, once he hit him over the head to get his attention, will straighten him.

    And, you had to ruin the happiness mode. Is Voldie still around.

    I hope you are feeling better.

    Author's Response:

    Voldy is dead. :o)

    You're so right.  Harry is just a boy.  He can't be perfect all the time, and really I think we all sometimes just expect too much of him.  I hope he can get all straightened out, now that he has something clearly going on, especially.  Sorry to ruin the happines.  LOL  It wouldn't be LC if I didn't though.  :oP 


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