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Reviews For Lily's Charm: The Gift
Fix them, please. Author's Response: LOL Poor Barbara, hiding in her corner. I will do my best. I don't want you in that corner for too long. LOL
Author's Response: Well, if Harry's not all right, it will be a very short sequel. Hee hee. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter though and I hope I'll get chapter 8 out pretty quickly as well. I am very excited for it. Thanks for reviewing. :o)
First I started crying for Remus who must be about to lose his job, lose the love of his life (he'll give her up in a fit of nobility), then I started crying for Severus when he leaped for the Floor in total fear for Harry, then I started crying for Harry who is in both physical and emotional pain (it sounds like) and is convinced that Sirius and Lupin both hate him as well as his dad. In fact, his dad hates him so much that Harry is convinced that he'll never be able to come home to the dungeons again, then I started crying for Severus who is watching his son die and is planning his own death right afterwards so he can be with Lily and Harry. This is too much crying! I hope you are back to your normal quick updates -- I don't look forward to a week or more of sniffing while I wait for the next installment. Mom Author's Response: Yep, me and my laptop are getting along great. :o) Wow, that IS a lot of crying. Well, I cried as well if that makes you feel any better. I'm sure it doesn't. LOL I will try to be quick in my next update, though of course I know you are waiting on Crucio as well and that's almost in the bag. Did you really think this was my most angstiest ever? Wow. I didn't even realize. Well, good to hear! I am off to type as fast as my stubby little fingers will allow!
Ok, so I don't know if I want to change my "favorite chapter" title from ch. 6 to this one...but its really, really close! This was amazing! Really!! And I should have paid more attention to your little poem at the beginning, because it says just who's in the crevice!! VOLDIE! (Our old friend...) So...do we get to find out just *how* he's channeling Sirius in Harry's mind?! This is totally confusing...you said he's dead (Voldie) and gone from the world...and yet he's able to communicate with Harry in his dreams...and now unconsciousness. Hmm...too many possibilities! Well, I must say though, I loved seeing a tired and sad and just finished crying Remus. Although I'm worried about what was said about Tonks...and Remus' job...and why he wasn't at the dinner...and why Tonks wasn't at the dinner. I'm just worried. Its sad, that poor werewolf has got a hard life. He could use some chocolate...perhaps we could all use some after reading this chapter! And Sev. That poor man. He's got a hard life too! But I did love seeing him so deeply concerned with Harry. Harry's description of his voice and how this *must* be a dream because Dad never talks like that and never tucked me in like that was jus hilarious! And I suppose it goes without saying that Harry's got a pretty hard life as of right now too. I seriously hope that ch. 8 isn't the last one...as you haven't said anything of the sort I hardly believe it. And that it doesn't end with Sev trading his life for Harry's...cuz that would just suck. And I would have to say that your black Dark Queen of angst, married to Voldemort hat was sewn to your head. (Ouch.) But YUPPERS!! LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!! Can't wait for the next one...hehe... But I do feel as though I should be freaking out about this, I'm kinda ok with it all. Really, Sev's going to save Harry with minor damage to his psyche and mental capacity and Harry'll confess to his being a total prat (which was partly due to Siri/Voldie) and they'll be skipping off into the sunset with Remus in tow with lots of medicine-laced chocolate! Perfecto! Ok, maybe not, of course you'll do a lot better...but please tell me I should be worried, because I'm just...not. Again, great chappie!! And its a semi-evil cliffie...darn you! But I love it (and you, of course!!) anyway! Have a good rest of a rainy weekend! Author's Response: Yay for my first review of the chapter! Yips! LOL Yep, old Voldy is in the crevice. Or more aptly, he created the crevice.... Now, now. I never said Voldy was channeling Sirius. After all, Voldy's dead. ;o) I'm glad you liked just finished crying Remus. That man is a head case right now. Even without Harry's angst, he was already. You'll have to wait to see about Tonks though. I have a new Tonks/Remus chapter in the works for y'all. Sev...yes, poor Sev. LOL I am chuckling that you enjoyed Harry's wooziness and not quite getting that it wasn't a dream because Severus was being so gentle. The last one! Heck, no. Please, do you even know how much angst I have planned for you? LOL Well, there won't be any skipping, sorry. And there might be damage to everyone's psyche...but probably for reasons you can't even imagine. Come on, what fun would it be if you could just figure it out all on your own? LOL Of course you should be worried. I am DQ, and my black hat IS sewn right to my skull now, so hold on tight! :oP |
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