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Title: Chapter 9: Maniacal 17 Jun 2008 10:34 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    You've done it again! Left us hanging by our fingertips. I feel like I have just been thrown backwards with Severus.

    I have to admit, I definitely don't understand how Remus is seeing or sensing Tonks all of a sudden, other than in that she would always be close to him mentally,. Or maybe its not just people's bodies that end up in this other place. Maybe lost dreams end up there too.

    I thought it was a bit sad when Remus told siri that Sev would do everything in his power to get Harry back, and then he growled at Sev to confirm it and Sev thought it was just as well for Remus that he had secured himself in the last few months as one of Harry's closest friends. He is still fighting having any kind of feelings for Remus himself, isn't he? He jsut will not admit it to himself. And poor Remy having to be the middle man between these twwo bitter enemies and having to lie, or at least withhold the truth from a dear old friend.

    I wonder will either back down...will either soften. I don't believe that Sirius will turn against Harry when he finds out he is not James son. He will be angry and jealous that James kept him in the dark and that James had become close to Severus, but he will not shun Harry. He will also be jealous of Remus's rlationship with Severus.

    This is a horrible place that poor Sirius has ended up. It is very like the old catholic doctrine of limbo. Nothingness...you can't go forward and you can't go back.

    I could feel Sev's anguish at how much time they were taking, how long he had been severed from Harry. And poor Harry is still resting on that cold, stone floor.

    Though a sense of time seems to be distorted in there. Sirius had no idea how long had passed.

    Perhaps something will happen with Moldywart that makes the three of them draw together to save Harry. Perhaps whatever that is, it will banish past hatred and resentment.

    It also seems that they don't think they will be able to bring Sirius back with them, but I wonder if something will happen to make that possible.

    More speculation. Glad you're writing this story and not me, Tab.

    I will finish with the ubiquitous...please update soon.

    ~Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Remus wasn't sensing Tonks.  All of them were seeing things they wanted the most.  And Remus wants Tonks back.

    Yeah, Severus is still fighting against Remus' friendship...probably even more in these last minutes because he sees the friendship between Sirius and Remus.  Sev has a little problem with jealousy.  So does Sirius.  LOL

    Yep, sirius is in a very sad state indeed.  He's nowhere and in nothing.  Poor man.

    They do need to find some way to work together to save Harry, but will it end there?  Probably. I can't really see them falling into each other's arms with remorse and love. 

    Hee hee.  I have fun with all the uncertainty.  Everything could definitely go either way.  Yep.  Glad you're intrigued though, Les!  Thanks for such a great review and all your ponderings.  :o)

     


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