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Title: Chapter 11: Reparations 27 Jun 2008 10:53 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    What caused Voldy's soul to disappear? Well, I thought it was HArry turning away from him and chosing Severus, but as he is still hiding and distrustful, I am not so sure. Still, he distrusts Sev's feelings for him; he still loves Sev and that is why his hurt is so profound.

    Then again, it could be that when Volde coiled closer to Sev who had just said he would sacrifice himself for the son he loves unequivocally, Voldes soul might just have been banished because he could not atand to be in the presence of that kind of shining love. Just as he had not been able to possess Harry when Harry thought of Sirius in the Dept. of Mysteries.

    And does any of that rambling make sense?

    Harry is back with Sev, but he needs to be be convinced that Sev loves him as much as he ever said he did.

    More waffling. Will stop now before I tie myself into even more knots.

    I think Sev is going to have to be the one to convince Sirius to try to go back with them. And Sev may just be able to do that as it will show Harry just how much he does love him. He loves him to the extent that he would even be willing to put up with Sirius Black again.

    I need hardly point out that this cliffie is even more of a precipice than the last one was.

    Great job,

    Lesley

    Author's Response: Ding, ding, ding!  The intended sacrifice did it!  Chocolate frogs for you.  And yes, your rambling makes sense, though it really isn't rambling at all.  Sirius is at a rough place right now.  You'll have to wait and see for that one.  And yep, I know I am giving out lots of evil cliffies lately.  I'll stop soon, don't worry.  LOL  Oh, and I haven't talked to you in forever.  I pinged you the other day.  Where ya been?  :o)
Title: Chapter 11: Reparations 27 Jun 2008 10:17 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    it was love Sev's willingness to take his son's place the ulitmate sacrifice, like Lily, that kind of love is so strong Voldy could not survive.
    Black realises Sev's love for Harry and feels as if there is no place or meaning for him

    Author's Response: Ding, ding!  Way to go Keats!  Chocolate frogs for you!  LOL  And bingo about Black as well.  Poor Sirius.  No love for him.  :oP  Thanks so much for the review.  I hope you'll like next chapter as much. 

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