| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 10 Aug 2009 8:59 pm
|
| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Ooof....big punch to the somach there, eh? Yeeesh! Big events in a short chapter.
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 27 Aug 2008 8:35 pm
|
| Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Wonderful Chapter! I love how it played out with Poppy talking to Sev. Then the fight and Harry needed to lose control and see that he was loved great chapter!
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 23 Aug 2008 9:39 pm
|
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Oh, wow...every chapter I say how bad I feel for all three of our boys, but I always mean it. The adjustment period is so rough for them, which is to be expected really. I think you're doing a fabulous job of showing us a realistic version of what would happen if Sirius were to come back and find that Harry and Severus have bonded and become close. It's a very hard thing for him to believe and accept. It's a huge loss to Sirius, and he's got to grieve for the lost relationship with Harry. He can't see yet that their relationship can be as strong as ever. Also, I imagine that he is honestly concerned about whether Severus' change of heart is genuine and lasting. We all know that it is, but everything is still so new to Sirius that he doesn't know what to think. I feel very sorry for him, but at the same time, I am angry with him, too, because though his feelings are understandable, he should have realised that confronting Harry...a young person who is very emotionally involved and particularly vulnerable right now...was not the way to handle the situation.
I feel badly for Severus because he is very remorseful about the past. I'd venture to say that he's tormented by it, when he lets himself dwell on how he mistreated Harry and on how his action allowed Harry to be mistreated by others.
But I really feel the worst for Harry here. He loves both Sirius and Severus, and though of course Severus comes first, he still feels torn between them, plus Sirius just threw all the lingering resentments and doubts that he'd buried into his face, and now he and Severus are going to have to face them...though that's really the best thing for them in the long run, I'm sure.
Well, anyway, fantastic chapter and I'm so eager for more!
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 22 Aug 2008 7:18 pm
|
| Reviewer: Danica (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
First of all, major hugs for you! I'm so happy and relieved that you posted the past two chapters. I nearly cried when I thought that this story would end. Thank you for pulling through!
I knew Harry would have some sort blow out due to all this supressed anger he's been pushing aside. But, wow. Poor, poor, Sirius. His realization of all the changes around him has been so painful.
You've done a fabulous job of showing the commitment and love that Sev and Harry have for each other. Their relationship and the trials they face are what bring me back to this story. I hope Sev can help Harry and Sirius rebuild their relationship. I also hope that you intend to shed some light onto the Remus/Tonks relationship. What's going on there?!
Glad you're back!
WOW As awful as it is to say, I really think that Sirius had that coming. He needed something shocking to make him finally realize that Harry and Severus do really care for each other as a family. While that may not diminish what Sirius is to Harry, Sirius is going to have to come to the realization that Harry needs and wants Severus in his life. Awesome awesome chapter. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Harry deals with this latest emotional breakdown, and what Severus is going to do about all the accidental magic. Keep up the great work and please please update again soon. LES
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 21 Aug 2008 4:50 pm
|
| Reviewer: Crystal (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
thank you thank you thank you for adding another chapter, I love your story, it is funny in some places and so sad in others, I am so glad you continued with it, Lily's charm is deffinately one of the best if not the best fan fic online, congrats on such wonderful work
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Crystal. What a nice compliment. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and that you liked the chapter. I enjoy the humor and the sadness and mixing them together. Thanks so much for the review. :o)
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 21 Aug 2008 3:44 pm
|
| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Oh wow!! Finally Sirius realizes the extent of Severus' love for Harry and vice versa!
I'm drained emotionally reading this; I feel their pain. I really hope that Sirius and Harry can reconcile, then Harry will be surrounded by all the love he deserves. I have a feeling though, that it is going to be a rocky road till it reaches that point.
Again, you have made the wait for an update worthwhile; hope there is another one soon!
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 21 Aug 2008 9:32 am
|
| Reviewer: fluff (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Well thats my angst sponge well and truly soaked! You really do write emotions amazingly well. You managed to make me feel alternatively sorry for Harry, Sev and Sirius and even Remus for having got caught in the middle. But at least Sirius is seeing that Sev does care about Harry, he just needs to realise that he can still be a part of Harry's life. As aways leaves you wanting more....
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 21 Aug 2008 7:10 am
|
| Reviewer: Solitare (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
wonderful chapter, hope you update soon, this is such a good story! Skittles to you
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 21 Aug 2008 5:53 am
|
| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
Wow. Absolutely fantastic chapter. That was...amazing, wonderful, awesome, incredible, everything. The emotions were so intense and descriptive you could actually feel them. Your best chapter yet. Absolutely brilliant.
|