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Reviews For Lily's Charm: The Gift
Yes Draco cannot be trusted as far as you can throw him so watch out Harry! And why do I feel everything is going too smoothly and trouble is lurking round the corner? Happy Aniversary for LC and thank you
“Has someone confunded you, Malfoy?” Seriously, I wanted to slap Draco silly! Yup, it's all too clear he wants something, so keep your eye on him, Harry. I'm glad Harry and Sirius made some headway into patching things up between them. But I felt so sorry for Severus feeling so left out, and not knowing about the mirror. As always, you write Severus' and Harry's banter SO well! "Enjoy your detention...." made me almost snort coffee out my nose. What were those mysterious comments about Christmas anyway? Huh, so Sirius quit the training. Wonder what the heck he'll do now. There were actually two more times I my heart hurt for Severus. The second time was when he walked back to the castle for the meeting with Dumbledore, with "the feeling an unwelcome realization that he couldn’t hold onto him forever." That coupled with the last sentence, "It would be a bitter pill indeed when Harry finally moved back into the tower." He still isn't really 100% confident he will never lose Harry, is he? For that alone, Severus gets my hug for the chapter whether he wants it or not! Happy Anniversary, LC...and thanks a gazillion, OE, for blessing us with this marvelous story. Us fans still can't get enough of it!
i love your snape and harry.they are perfect. and draco.i think something wrong.if draco date sara why he around ginny not sara.i hope harry and ginny never break up.i don't like they break up and cheat on stories. Author's Response: Don't worry, Harry and Ginny won't be cheating on each other in this story. Draco is just trying to be nice to Ginny so that Harry will be his friend, since he needs Harry's help. Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. :o)
Ok, so of course you know I love it! I am so pleased that Sirius and Harry have made up. Hey, I have a question. Severus seemed pretty tough on the students in class. Has he gotten over his aversion to discipline Harry, or will Harry get special treatment in class, or is that only for outside of class. Ok, it's early still, and I'm rambling and not making sense. It's just that Snape still seemed easier on Ron and Harry, then the others. I was glad to see that Snape hadn't totally lost his nastiness to the other Gryffs though. I like a nasty Sev! ;) Or should I say adorably grumpy! ;) Oh, and btw, I love the name of the chapter. "Draco's Imaginary Friend!" Too funny! ;) Can't wait for the next chappie! Author's Response: Sorry! I really tried but I didn't quite make my deadline. :o( No, Severus is definitely not going to do any disclplining of Harry in class. If you note, he did tell Harry to focus on his potion, but in an innocuous way. Severus, no matter that he is 'adorably grumpy' is not ever going to publicly lecture, or whatnot, Harry in front of the class. And with Ron, I'm glad you noted that. I know some might cry foul for giving Harry special treatment (well, not berating him), but no matter whatever else Harry is--he's Severus' son first. He did take points while Harry had a big, giant head. :oP I did that bit to show that Severus has changed where Harry is concerned, and that includes his friends. It's been coming on for awhile now though. Being agreeable to Remus, and he's been agreeable to Ron for a long time now. Thanks! I had fun with that chapter title. LOL :o) |
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