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Title: Chapter 29: Excalibur 11 Dec 2008 11:54 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! It seems that there might still be some tension between Sirius and the others, unfortunately. I hope they can figure out what Simon is up to soon. And I love how Severus is so perceptive about the Dursleys and Harry's feelings.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks Kristeh!  There is lots of tension to be found unfortunately.  I'm glad you liked the chapter though.  Thanks for reviewing.
Title: Chapter 29: Excalibur 11 Dec 2008 1:25 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was great! I especially like the part where Sev plunked the pillow away from Harry's head! Too funny!

    Now you've got me worried that Harry will be taken away from Severus. Monday young lady, and snap to it! I can't wait till then!

    I love the way you write the banter between Harry and Severus, sweet, funny and incrediblity realistic.

    Author's Response:

    That pillow part was fun, eh?  I'm glad you liked it.

    Well, it wouldn't be LC without some drama, you know.  What fun would it be if there was no threat to Harry and he was just happy and healthy?  :oP

    Thank for the compliment.  Just glad you enjoyed it.

Title: Chapter 29: Excalibur 11 Dec 2008 12:34 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Simon Bavistock is ascending to the position of the new Dark Lord, specifically where Harry is concerned. WHY does he want control over Harry, or at least over the person that has charge of Harry?

    Harry must feel a bit like an rubber band. He is being stretched so thin between Sirius and Severus, with poor Remus also having to go to bat for the two of them.

    The earlier scene where ron spent the night in the dungeons was so nice. Severus is a good dad. He even made sure that Ron ate before he left for classes.

    Not sure what is going on with Remus and Tonks, but for a man who should be ecstatic because of his changed circumstances, he is really quite miserable. Does the fact that only three people have definitive proof that Remus is a werewolf mean that in LC's world, there is no Werewolf Registry within the MoM? I always found it a bit of a silly idea anyway. If a registry had been in existence when Remus was at Hogwarts, then heaps of people would have known that Remus was there and being taught amongst their children. surely a WW would have to register as soon as he/she is bitten, or at least, after the first transformation.

    As sad as it is to say, Sirius' reappearance in the land of the living is certainly causing an awful lot of problems and heart searching. When will sev and Harry be able to live a normal life, I wonder? And are Sev and Sirius ever going to be on the same page?

    Things are getting pretty hairy again, Tab, but very thought provoking.

    Can't wait till Monday (or Tuesday here).

    Les~

    Author's Response:

    Simon is up to no good, that's all I'll tell you.  Hee hee.

    I'm glad you liked the scene with Ron.  That was just a fun tidbit to put in there.  Harry is finally getting to be a normal kid, at least in between Simon's plotting. LOL

    No werewolf registry here, or at least Remus never put his name on it.  Why would a werewolf register?  They would have to be suicidal to announce something like that. 

    Sirius' reappearance is causing a lot of trouble.  It caused a lot of good too though, as his words were the catalyst to help Harry and Severus bust through a lot of their tension.  Sev and Sirius on the same page?  Doesn't seem so likely, I'm afraid.  :o(

    LOL  Well, Les, it wouldn't be LC without a little bit of hair.  :oP

Title: Chapter 29: Excalibur 11 Dec 2008 8:58 am
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, well, well...things aren't quickly back to normal between Remus and Tonks. The interaction and dialogue between Remus and Sirius has certainly made me raise an eyebrow. Poor Sirius; back wandering that house with nothing productive to do.

    My pity only goes so far, because I'm not sure exactly what his agenda is with regards to Harry. I know he wants to keep Harry safe and sound, but I'm not sure he feels that ultimately is with Severus. What a thought provoking conversation.

    Ooooh....I don't like this Simon character one bit.

    And who would have thought Ron would be having conversations where he sided with Severus against Harry. Woo hoo! Go Ron!

    I've never given Ron the hug in a chapter. I think he just earned his first one!

    Author's Response:

    Poor Sirius, indeed.  Or maybe not...

    I'm glad you enjoyed the conversation between all the men.  It was a fun one. 

    Simon is a tricky fellow, it's true.  But hey, we need a villain, after all.

    Yay!  Ron gets a hug.  He's really taken to Severus.  LOL  :o)


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