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Reviews For Lily's Charm: The Gift
*hem hem* Let's see if my review can do this chapter justice. Well, first of all, the image of Harry shuffling out with wild hair and eavesdropping was really adorable, even if, well, you didn't mean it to be... :-) You know me and my love for crazy-haired, sleepy Harry... Anyway... I love the subtleness of Dawn's creepiness...like her slow smiles. It really makes us all skeptical of her intentions right along with Harry. And I loved Sirius in this chapter. You wrote him perfectly. And I won't say anything further except *Wahhhh...sobs* Harry'd better get out of his funk and help Severus decorate the tree!! I'll be crushed. Though he really does have reason to be irritated. It's sad how he's faced reality and Severus hasn't...or at least doesn't want to. This chapter had a...forest-green aura about it. Like...calm, but tense...and pleasantly dark. Don't ask. You already know I'm a weirdo. LOL. Severus and Sirius really do need to have a chat. And I can't wait to read it. I adore your Remus. Have I ever told you? Muy perfecto.
Poor Harry he must be frustrated though. All he wanted was a normal life, and he's still not getting it! Amazing as usual my Dear. Now hurry up and get workiing on the next one, (pretty please with sugar on top!) I'm dyting to see what happens next. Author's Response: LOL Harry is a tricky one... And nope, Harry won't have a normal life for awhile yet. I'm already working on the next chapter. Glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Harry and Severus have a rocky road ahead of them. :o) |
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