| Title: Chapter 32: Metamorphosis
| 15 Aug 2009 9:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Okay, this chapter was fantastic. You did it so perfectly, I had to say something. I can't express how glad I was to see both Remus and Severus buck up and do something about Harry. Cause whether he was aware of it or not, he really was taking advantage of his dad. Go Remus for pointing that out! :-)
Anyhow, great chapter! I loved it!
| Title: Chapter 32: Metamorphosis
| 14 Jan 2009 1:27 pm
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| Reviewer: me (Anonymous)
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well, so far i love this story, but i think harry is acting really oc now, i mean he was more like a leader and thought things through and now he is childish and stupid... so i hope we will get the old harry back, and i think remus, sirius and severus are to dominant in this story, i would love to read more interaction with harry and his friends...
| Title: Chapter 32: Metamorphosis
| 13 Jan 2009 8:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I'm so glad to be able to finally review this amazing chapter! I loved it of course. Remus telling Harry off was great! Poor Harry though. I do feel kind of bad for him.
In one sense, Severus asked for this, by being so lenient with Harry for so long. Harry is just a kid, after all. If Sev doesn't lay down certain boundaries for him, how can he expect Harry not to be tempted. He's just sixteen.
It's unrealistic to expect Harry to always be so mature. Sev needs to finally be the parent, and set limits and enforce consequences when Harry doesn't adhere to those limits.
I hope that Severus can finally be the father that Harry needs. Strong, and steady, and realise that Harry needs a dad. He's got enough friends.
I can't wait for the next chapter this is such a great story!
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully, it won't be too long. :o)
| Title: Chapter 32: Metamorphosis
| 10 Jan 2009 11:15 am
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| Reviewer: fluff (Signed)
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Oh dear poor Harry he was abd idiot but I could feel his shame and poor Severus his disappointment in Harry was so sad.
Severus probably does not need to tell him off too much as he has realised how much he upset his Dad. Thanks for writing so quickly and posting this chapter. Devoured it much too quickly! Will go back and read again and luxuriate in it!!
The last line of the chapter is quite revealing. Has Sirius really been this dense? Surely even he would not be irresponsible enough to do anything that would endanger Harry, even to pursue a romantic relationship. His prior assertions that Dawn is harmless never rang true. It would have made more sense for him to say he knew the risks, but could take care of himself and Harry. This would not have satisfied Severus either, but would have made Sirius appear more credible and less "idiotic".
As for Dawn being Voldemort reincarnated, I agree this seems a red herring. The piercing blue eyes suggest Dumbledore instead!
Very long-winded review over at fanfic.net, but I forgot to mention Sirius's final thought. He has finally seen the light it would seem. About time.
And I think that Dawn is under Imperious, or she is just evil anyway.
Les~
Author's Response: I loved your review on ffnet! I'm so tickled and thrilled you enjoyed the chapter so much. :o) Yep, it's about time Sirius sees the light. I've been waiting forever while everyone bashed him. LOL Dawn...we shall see about her.
Amazing chapter! Why can't Harry ever be a good little boy and listen to his dad? Then again, were would the fun be in that? Harry's reaction to Sev' and Remus' annoyance and disappointment.
Sev's finally acting like a dad. You know you're in really deep trouble when the parent starts using the middle name. Poor Harry! It's in for it and right before Christmas.
Author's Response: LOL Harry can't really be expected to take to authority easily, even when he's not trying to be a pain. He's just not used to it. LOL Yes, Harry is definitely in hot water. Poor kid. Ah well, we'll have fun at least. :oP
whew, you had be going in the last chapter.
Let us have a cheer for Remus "the wolf taking care of the cub of his pack" Lupin.
Well. at least, Sirius didn't plan to have the female scorpi..., err lawyer lady at his house
but he still isn't mature enough to raise a puppy let alone be responsible for a child.
Groundation for life is facing Harry. (that is what my son and his friends used to call it.)
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