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Title: Chapter 32: Metamorphosis 10 Jan 2009 7:04 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh ouch. The disappointment radiating off Snape is much worse than any yelling or snark that he could produce. I can't believe it took this for Sirius to finally notice how much Sev has changed. I think that things might change between him and Sev now, but is it too late for Sirius to make amends? Sev is the type that would carry a grudge to his deathbed if he could and he might not accept any sort of apology after Sirius pointlessly endangered Harry, despite the fact that it was an accident.

    On the other hand, was it an accident? The theory about him being under imperius would say no because Dawn could have easily made him lie. I think it was probably an accident though and that Dawn is obviously over-stepping the bounds of their relationship now. Hopefully Sirius will see how creepy it is that she went out of her way to look up where his plot was and plan to show up at just the right time to see Harry.

    You're Dawn is uber creepy, btw. You've sort of hinted about the possibility that she might be Voldemort reincarnated, but I think that might just be to throw the readers off. I think it's much more likely that she's either under Lucius' imperius or working for him in some way, which is really sick since Harry has already testified for him, which was a big favor that he clearly did not deserve.

    I bet Harry is extremely embarrassed now: getting in trouble in front of his girlfriend? Ouchers. I wonder what kind of punishment awaits in the next chapter... I have a feeling that any favors Snape was going to grant him have been long forgotten now.

    Great chapter--please update soon!

    -P.G.

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