Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium 27 Mar 2016 7:16 pm
Reviewer: Michelle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What is the name of the sequel
    Hope I had lots to f chapters
Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium 15 Aug 2009 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    :P Brought tears to my eyes the way Siri died...again. Not as much as the end of HBP did, but I still felt some grief for the fact of his death. I also liked that he died saving someone. How noble, eh? Truly a Gryffindor act.
Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium 08 Mar 2009 6:42 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! You have definitely built a strong relationship between Harry and Severus, step by step. It's developed so naturally and each chapter is so good.... this is one of my all time favorite stories. And YES PLEASE to posting the sequel here! How can you even ask!!! ;-)
Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium 01 Mar 2009 7:25 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG, the whole suicide rite was an eerie twist to this chapter. Thank goodness Harry wasn't coherent enough to test the spell before leaving! I can't help but wonder why Severus is familiar with the suicide rite himself; perhaps he would have contemplated it after Lily's death. He must be feeling so relieved... I know I am!

    Great chapter!

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium 25 Feb 2009 1:23 am
Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fantastic. (I don't usually read on this cite, but since ff.net is being stupid, what the hay!)
    I loved this installment of lily's charm. You have a very unique and amazing way of playing out terrible events in a realistic and emotionally trying way, and I love it. Sirius's death is unfortunate, but I do agree that it was something that needed to be dealt with, and you did more than just justice to the event. I loved Remus's profession in the last chapter. "I loved him". Truly heartbreaking. Harry's reactions as well are just what I would imagine. I really love Severus in this chapter, though. He has grown so much, even more so than Harry. And that's saying something!
Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium 24 Feb 2009 4:10 pm
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    awww such a great transition period! a much healthier way to handle the grief! i'll be interesting to see where tonks and remus's relationship goes now! great update!
Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium 24 Feb 2009 6:07 am
Reviewer: Blackthorne (Signed) [Report This]
    A very realistic chapter, especially in terms of the regrets both Harry and Severus have about all the unfulfilled potential of their relationship with Sirius. It can be tempting in fiction to tie up loose ends too well, to have the old enemies reconcile before the finale, etc. but this so often does not happen in real life. Instead we are left with things we wish we had said or done after a death. Good job tying up loose ends from the previous couple of chapters as well (how much Severus understood about Harry's plans, etc.)

    I still cannot get used to Severus expressing so much affection for Harry through physical gestures. He did this particularly much in this chapter, though he certainly had plenty of motivation.

    Yes, there can still be a snow dog. It will just have to be made by Harry, Severus, and Remus. They might find it therapeutic.

    Author's Response:

    Severus' overly touchiness has more to do with the fact that he was trying to reassure himself that Harry was all right.  It's got to be rather shocking that your child was only moments away from killing himself.  Also, I've established previously, that as a child who was denied love and affection for most of his life, Harry craves it.  I think most human beings crave physical touch, whether or not they realize it or are willing to admit it.  And Severus has grown to the point of unselfishness in regards to Harry that he can offer Harry what he needs.  And yes, since one of the people Harry loved most in the world has just died, I think Harry needed all the physical affection he can get.  Another thing to consider, is that Severus is well aware of just how easily such physical expressions of affection came to Sirius (at least my rendition of him), and it is quite plausible that Severus was unconsciously trying to fill that new void in Harry's life...  See the part in this chapter where Severus expresses silent delight that he has been able to fill one of Sirius' other roles--a person that Harry can talk to, to add to that plausibility.

    I wanted to leave the recriminations there.  I am glad you liked it.  Guilt often comes with bereavemennt. 

    And yes, snowdogs would likely be very therapeutic for all of them.  Thanks for your review.

Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium 24 Feb 2009 4:09 am
Reviewer: xrayjuliet (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great job! Really wonderful.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

     

Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium 24 Feb 2009 2:00 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay, that's 2 chapters that have tugged my heartstrings and made me tearful...thanks:)
    That was a great way to deal with Harry's mounting tension and grief. You just made Severus awesome and allowed Sirius to die a huge hero!
    I'll just never get enough of your stories...or for that matter, your cohorts Jade and Leslie.

    Author's Response: Thanks.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Severus was wonderful to write this chapter.  Finally reaching his full potential as a father and as a friend.  And in general, as a person.  The entire impetus for the LC stories.  :o)
Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium 23 Feb 2009 8:02 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    You are seriously depleting my supply of tissues!!!

    So sad, yet this tragedy has brought Severus and Harry even closer. I really wish that Severus could have worked things out with Sirius before he died, but at least Harry now has some peace knowing that the animosity died along with Sirius.

    Lovely chapter even though I bawled my eyes out! Oh my, I'm at work, and here I go again!

    Please hurry my dear, because I'm sure that I'll have a good cry at Sirius'...sob...funeral....sob.

    Author's Response: Thanks Dawn!  I love to make you cry.  :oD

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5