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Reviews For Lily's Charm: The Gift
All of the finger-combing and the hugs, all the touching--he cannot get close enough to his son. And Remus too needs the physicality of touch. Beautiful...Sirius would be pleased, even with Severus Lesley~ Author's Response: Thanks Les! I'm so glad you liked it! It was such a fun chapter for write. :oD Yeah, Severus certainly did have a lot of reason to be angry, didn't he? A normal reaction for a parent in this situation, I think. And yep, Remus needs that love too. I think most of that Severus hugging was becasue Severus was so freaked out. LOL And plus, humans just need that I think, especially in the wake of grief like this. And I agree. Sirius would be pleased. :o)
It's good that Harry is finally letting himself grieve for Sirius and to regret the lost opportunities. He needs to do that before he can heal. I'm happy Severus was there for him and that he acknowledged both how much Sirius' sacrifice meant to him and that he has his own regrets as well. It's very mature of him, and it shows that he's grown a lot, too, since accepting Harry as his son. I'm glad they went to Remus, too. Sirius' loss is probably the hardest on him. He really does need his other friends to be with him now. Excellent chapter as always! I'm looking forward to the next one. Author's Response: Thanks Kristeh! Harry is finally getting what it means to have a parent, I think. And he's grown up quite a bit, I agree. Only two two whole stories! LOL Sev too! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Loved the chapter, and thanks for sharing it. It was good that even Severus got to drink to Sirius' memory. They may not have gotten on in life, but his sacrifice meant a great deal to both Harry and Severus. Great job. Author's Response: LOL Poor Remus. :oP And thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it! Always appreciated.
It was good to see Severus react with love to Harry's grief-stricken "stupidity". He was angry as any parent would be, yet also filled with relief that Harry was alright. He tempered this with the love that he so obviously feels for Harry and was able to be supportive and help Harry see what could have happened and where he was thinking or rather, not thinking. Interesting that both of them wished that they had treated Sirius better. Guilt is usually a component of grief. Liked the ending too. Author's Response: Thanks! I agree with the guilt part. It's so hard to have to think of all you could have done differently when someone dies. I'm glad you liked Severus' reactions here; they were fun to write. And the end with Remus' little crush was fun too. :oP |
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