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Title: Chapter 21: Red 19 Jun 2009 4:19 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm glad that Harry an Severus are taking a holiday together, they need it.

    Augh, I should've known the conversation between Sirius and Harry wouldn't go well. And poor both of them. There sure are a lot of hurt feelings going around.

    One thing I'd like to point out is at the beginning. It reads: "...as soon as he was aware that they were no longer at the Ministry..." and then goes into a lengthy scene without any indication to the setting.

    I was just thinking that it would be a good idea to mention *where* they Apparated to, because the reader is left wondering this until Sirius goes into the kitchen to get drinks.

    Anyhow, I am enjoying the read. I love that Harry asked Severus for the headache potion. Progress! Oh, I also love how Severus has a total list of things they need to discuss! Haha, that is so awesome!

    Moving on! :-)
Title: Chapter 20: Either, Or 19 Jun 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, so much to say about this chapter. The first part with Severus and his father was so sad and hard to get through. Nothing excuses his behavior to Harry (and probably the other students, too), but when you look at his sad childhood, it really explains his character as an adult and why he is the way he is.

    I LOVED the scene where he helps Harry with his tie. That was really sweet an just a great father and son moment. Sigh.

    Also, awesome about the Dark Mark going away. Yay!

    Dawn creeps me out. I wish they'd all stay away from poor Harry...

    And maybe I missed something in an earlier chapter, but it wasn't until the scene between Remus and Sirius that I figured out *why* Severus and Harry were getting dressed up and going out. It may be worthwhile to go back in towards the beginning of that scene and clear that up.

    Anyhow, great chapter! But if you'll excuse me, ya left off with a terribly suspenseful cliffie, so I need to go read that now. ;-)
Title: Epilogue 20 Apr 2009 11:16 pm
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! I had tears in my eyes at this ending! Utterly beautiful! They've come so far together! it really is so touching! I can't wait to see Harry making it through his last year, becoming a Godfather and deciding on a career path. Pleaseee continuee!!
Title: Epilogue 09 Mar 2009 2:16 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG, my heartstrings tugged when I saw the words "The End". I can't believe you've arrived at that point. I feel a mixture of sadness and joy, at realising that this is the end. I know of course that you'll be writing a sequel, and that is keeping me going, and it was an amazing story, but I still feel a little sad that it's over. You should be very proud as such an amazing accomplishment.

    I loved the Epilogue, and Remus' reaction to being a Dad. I'm so excited and anxious to read the sequel! Great job!

    Author's Response: I know!  It's so hard to let this one go, though it was easier than LC.  I don't really feel like this was an ending of Gift, but more of a beginning for the rest of the story of their lives.  :o)
Title: Epilogue 09 Mar 2009 12:11 am
Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Delightful story and development of characters and story. I am looking forward to another sequel and do hope that Severus and Harry remain the main characters as they are the reason I read your story.

    Great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad you're enjoying.  Severus and Harry will definitely remain the main characters of the story--no worries there.  That's what LC is all about.  I just wanted to warn people really that Ginny and Harry will continue their relationship and Ginny will be appearing a lot more often.  Oddly enough, some people hate Ginny. :o)
Title: Epilogue 09 Mar 2009 12:03 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a such a brilliant story—one of the top HP stories on the net, I think. Thank you so much for sharing it. I look forward to the sequel!

    Author's Response: Well, thank you very much.  I really appreciate the compliment.  And I'm thrilled that you've enjoyed the story.  :o)
Title: Epilogue 08 Mar 2009 7:25 pm
Reviewer: Emily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have absolutely adored this story.I am happy that you are planning on including Ginny more in the next story,she is one of my favorite characters. I haven't reviewed on this story before but I love how realistic the whole thing is as far as following Snapes Cannon personality
    It's good to see that even though he is a bit of a softy with Harry he's still our good old bitter Snape when he needs to be.
    Can't wait for the sequel!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I'm so glad you decided to review.  I love to hear from everyone.  Ginny is one of my favorites as well. :o)  I'm glad you've enjoyed the characterization of Snape.  He's so much fun to write.  :oD
Title: Epilogue 08 Mar 2009 7:01 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY!

    Author's Response: :oD  Goes double for me!
Title: Chapter 37: In Memorium 08 Mar 2009 6:42 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! You have definitely built a strong relationship between Harry and Severus, step by step. It's developed so naturally and each chapter is so good.... this is one of my all time favorite stories. And YES PLEASE to posting the sequel here! How can you even ask!!! ;-)
Title: Epilogue 08 Mar 2009 6:23 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That was cute--I'm glad you chose to put the epilogue on. Now you've gotten me curious about the next fic though (and I'm doing my best to avoid the spoilers on the board, but it's hard!). I wonder if we're going to see Harry's summer break, or if you are going to start it at his 7th year...

    Anyway, I loved Remus hugging Sev, lol. Despite his shock, he took it very well. It's good to see Sev so loose now with his emotions. I'm also glad to see that Harry is going to be a dotting godfather--I'm psyched for the new fic!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: You shall soon find out.  LOL  And I don't think there are really any spoilers--mostly, just people speculating. I've only added that Harry and Ginny will figure prominently into the story as a warning to Ginny haters.  :oP  I'm so glad you're excited for the new story.  Thanks so much for all your reviews. :o)

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