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Reviews For Lily's Charm: The Gift
Augh, I should've known the conversation between Sirius and Harry wouldn't go well. And poor both of them. There sure are a lot of hurt feelings going around. One thing I'd like to point out is at the beginning. It reads: "...as soon as he was aware that they were no longer at the Ministry..." and then goes into a lengthy scene without any indication to the setting. I was just thinking that it would be a good idea to mention *where* they Apparated to, because the reader is left wondering this until Sirius goes into the kitchen to get drinks. Anyhow, I am enjoying the read. I love that Harry asked Severus for the headache potion. Progress! Oh, I also love how Severus has a total list of things they need to discuss! Haha, that is so awesome! Moving on! :-)
I LOVED the scene where he helps Harry with his tie. That was really sweet an just a great father and son moment. Sigh. Also, awesome about the Dark Mark going away. Yay! Dawn creeps me out. I wish they'd all stay away from poor Harry... And maybe I missed something in an earlier chapter, but it wasn't until the scene between Remus and Sirius that I figured out *why* Severus and Harry were getting dressed up and going out. It may be worthwhile to go back in towards the beginning of that scene and clear that up. Anyhow, great chapter! But if you'll excuse me, ya left off with a terribly suspenseful cliffie, so I need to go read that now. ;-)
I loved the Epilogue, and Remus' reaction to being a Dad. I'm so excited and anxious to read the sequel! Great job! Author's Response: I know! It's so hard to let this one go, though it was easier than LC. I don't really feel like this was an ending of Gift, but more of a beginning for the rest of the story of their lives. :o)
Great job! Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying. Severus and Harry will definitely remain the main characters of the story--no worries there. That's what LC is all about. I just wanted to warn people really that Ginny and Harry will continue their relationship and Ginny will be appearing a lot more often. Oddly enough, some people hate Ginny. :o)
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much. I really appreciate the compliment. And I'm thrilled that you've enjoyed the story. :o)
It's good to see that even though he is a bit of a softy with Harry he's still our good old bitter Snape when he needs to be. Can't wait for the sequel! Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I'm so glad you decided to review. I love to hear from everyone. Ginny is one of my favorites as well. :o) I'm glad you've enjoyed the characterization of Snape. He's so much fun to write. :oD
Author's Response: :oD Goes double for me!
Anyway, I loved Remus hugging Sev, lol. Despite his shock, he took it very well. It's good to see Sev so loose now with his emotions. I'm also glad to see that Harry is going to be a dotting godfather--I'm psyched for the new fic! -P.G. Author's Response: You shall soon find out. LOL And I don't think there are really any spoilers--mostly, just people speculating. I've only added that Harry and Ginny will figure prominently into the story as a warning to Ginny haters. :oP I'm so glad you're excited for the new story. Thanks so much for all your reviews. :o) |
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