I think I'm in love with this story. Why haven't you updated?
this is really good. i do hope that you will update it soon!
As if being trapped in a cursed and haunted former lunatic asylum isn't creepy enough, with Snape...Voldemort's coming? It's like every ghost story Harry's ever heard coming true all at once!
Awesome! =) Please update real soon! I can't wait for the next chapter. =)
What a place to leave this! Wow! I do hope that you eventually post the next chapter when real life gives you the time and inspiration. This is very emotionally powerful and... just... WOW!
Mean cliffie... Very mean one.
But then, the story is just brilliant. The idea of Harry and Snape taken prisoner together and this following the sixth year is a wonderful one. I love the way the two dance around each other, turning from hunter to prey with each and every sentence. (Although Harry is more often on the unlucky position.)
I really hope you're going to continue this...
Thanks a lot,
ai
I love this story, it's very different. Everything is well written and executed wonderfully. The only problem is you lack punctuation in much of your dialogue. Such as the last line: "Potter" Snape croaked. You should always have a comma there. It would be, "Potter," Snape croaked. Other than that, this is a fantastic story. Let's put it this way, usually if there are errors in a story I won't read it because they bother me, but I still read your story. Shows how much I like it. :)
| Title: FOUND
| 16 Nov 2008 7:00 pm
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| Reviewer: scopart (Anonymous)
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Wow...
This is fantastic. You've done a wonderful job so far (and certainly gotten me hooked!)
What is WITH you peole and cliffhangers????
oh poor severus and harry being discovered by lord mouldywarts, i hope they survive
Author's Response: They will. One of them will anyway ;)
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