Wow. What a chapter! Great thoughts leading on to the dialogue!
Ooh, you're back! Welcome!
I found this such an intriguing setup that I've been checking regularly to see if you'd extended the story. I'm so glad to see you have. Is that Lily haunting Severus? *waits patiently*
Author's Response: Thank you! And back with vengeance, hehe. You'll see who/what it is soon.
Amazing! Thanks for 2 updates!!!
Author's Response: I am trying harder, lol. Thanks!
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| 16 Sep 2008 3:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Lola (Anonymous)
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Good chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
This is one of the best I have read in a long time - and I mean that! The canon is perfect - please please try to keep it that way! (Though developing it of course)! At first I thought the voice was Dumbledore's. Hmm. Now I shall have to rethink. Hope things are going better in your family now. Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, and - do you have a beta? You keep missing words out occasionally. (I would volunteer) (:
Author's Response: Thank you! I'd love a beta, as I am German and my English just isn't perfect. It will also help to finish the story. Motivation and all. BTW, how can I contact you? Can't find the feature, lol.
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