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Reviews For Magic, Interrupted.
Damn! How can you leave us like that! :O Please please update soon! Love your story. Author's Response: Very soon. Very soon. Patience, grasshopper.
Author's Response: I am always glad to fill hollow holes :D Thanks for your review, it's very encouraging.
I found the fact that Harry was so good at medicine a little out of character, since that background wasn't established in the books, nor in this story quite enough, but I really enjoyed the reverse healing, with Harry taking care of Snape. lovely. One part in that that needs to be fixed a little was when Harry came back to take care of Snape, and he was described as "Snape showed no reaction. His forehead was glistening with sweat." It wasn't really clear that Snape was passed out, or his eyes closed, or even lying down. Which made it a little odd that harry felt safe enough to try to take care of him, and was then startled when Snape opened his eyes. I think that was all. Congrats on getting a beta! I was a little sad about the fact that you changed the name of your story. "The Drill" was a really memorable title, and I would always be able to remember what the story was about because of the title. But I feel like the new title has been used before. It's the type that blends in with all the other title on the site. I would have personally renamed the story with the title of the insane asylum or something, but it's your choice. :) Thank you for the update! I am really enjoying the story. Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I fixed the two things, hopefully it makes more sense now. And I changed the title because originally, the would have drilled themselves out of there, Snape would obliviate Harry and things would continue as in the books. Now, this is not going to happen, it will be my first long and AU story, hence the title. I googled it, couldn't find another story with the name and after watching Girl, Interrupted, I liked it, lol. But the old name did have some flair, you are right.
Hmmmmpf.
Please continue writting!!!
I love the originality of this story, you have managed to take a common theme and make it your own, by little twists and turns. Update soon, I would like to know if Snape's attitude will change at now that he knows the extent of the abuse that Harry has suffered at the hands of his relatives.
Author's Response: Thank you. From this point onwards it will be hard to keep them in character. But I'll try my best. |
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