Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: CLEANED 01 Oct 2008 3:24 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting, detailed story. I like the way you're building the mystery.
Title: CLEANED 30 Sep 2008 8:08 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your story. This is really getting good. I like Snape and Harry both, the way you portray them. They're both very canon like and complicated, not one sided by any means. Very good writing.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am trying to capture the tension. I don't like when Snape goes soft too soon ;)
Title: CLEANED 30 Sep 2008 7:14 am
Reviewer: elocution (Anonymous) [Report This]
    the fact that this place actually exists TERRIFIES me. i would totally go research it now, except it is past my bedtime and i only reviewed to say that this story is amazing, and...eileen? (because i must get my speculations out into the open. 'tis necessary.)

    Author's Response:

    You will find out soon enough. Voldemort will read the contents of that file. (inserts evil laugh).

     

    And yes, it exists, I have been a few times. The history is absolutely terrifying. It's also known as "Cunninghame Combination Poor House" "Ravenspark Lunatic Asylum" and "Ravenspark Hospital". It used to be poorhouse, workhouse and hospital at the same time. I even got trapped, well for 20 minutes or so and heard footsteps upstairs, no kidding. My husband's best friend once went for curiosity and through the window saw someone hanging there just before it was closed down. He later found out that it was the janitor. He had left a letter saying: "I am sorry I let the fire go out".

     

    So much for that. We used to live very close. It is supposed to be haunted because the people have had a terrible time there and they were and still are not buried properly. The list was real.  

Title: CLEANED 30 Sep 2008 7:06 am
Reviewer: Batfan7 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That's a seriously weird list of admittance reasons. Who'd need to go to an insane asylum for 'infamy' or because they're 'ungifted'? Makes me doubt the intelligence of the 'hospital' staff.

    Interesting story! I look forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: It is. And it's real. I think the list has been published somewhere. If not, a book about this place is soon to be published. Thanks for reviewing :)
Title: CLEANED 30 Sep 2008 2:31 am
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW! This is really getting interesting. I'm looking forward to more! Please update soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I will. Next chapter is already written, just needs betaed. Thanks for your review.
Title: CLEANED 30 Sep 2008 2:16 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you. And thanks for the name change. I realise this is a bit confusing, but it had to be done.
Title: CLEANED 30 Sep 2008 12:14 am
Reviewer: Slythami (Signed) [Report This]
    Thats so creepy- and cool. Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you. I will.
Title: CLEANED 29 Sep 2008 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Cicci Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm intrigued.
    I don't always follow the plot-line, sometimes it's written in a confusing way, but it's very original and with great language.
    Im looking foward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: It will all make sense very soon. Thanks for reviewing :)
Title: CLEANED 29 Sep 2008 7:32 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ok, so I was a little confused, until I finally read the little note that you had changed the title!

    I thought, I could have sworn that this story had another title!

    No matter you call it--it is brilliant!

    Author's Response: Thank you :) I HAD to change it and my user name, too as I was using my husband's nickname. Sorry for the confusion.
Title: CLEANED 29 Sep 2008 1:12 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    You have piqued my curiosity!

    I'm glad that you've updated, and I hope that you are feeling better. Your story is original, and keeps the reader guessing; I like that.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and hopefully your health will continue to improve.

    Author's Response: Thank you :) You will not be disappointed.

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