Wow, great! Keep going! I really like the situation and I am wondering how exactly, Harry will find hood. That seems like the hardest chore of all, but somehow he has to do it if they are stuck there for a week! please update soon! This is great. :)
Wow. What a chapter! Great thoughts leading on to the dialogue!
| Title: REFLECTED
| 23 Sep 2008 5:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Brandy (Anonymous)
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This is interesting so far! Can't wait to read more!
Poor Harry, life just never seem to be simple for him, does it?
You're idea is so original, I really hope Snape softens up towards Harry soon.
Author's Response: They'll both have to soften up at some point, don't they? Doesn't seem as if they are getting anywhere otherwise. Thanks for the review :)
Ooh, you're back! Welcome!
I found this such an intriguing setup that I've been checking regularly to see if you'd extended the story. I'm so glad to see you have. Is that Lily haunting Severus? *waits patiently*
Author's Response: Thank you! And back with vengeance, hehe. You'll see who/what it is soon.
Amazing! Thanks for 2 updates!!!
Author's Response: I am trying harder, lol. Thanks!
| Title: WHACKED
| 16 Sep 2008 3:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Lola (Anonymous)
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Good chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
This is one of the best I have read in a long time - and I mean that! The canon is perfect - please please try to keep it that way! (Though developing it of course)! At first I thought the voice was Dumbledore's. Hmm. Now I shall have to rethink. Hope things are going better in your family now. Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, and - do you have a beta? You keep missing words out occasionally. (I would volunteer) (:
Author's Response: Thank you! I'd love a beta, as I am German and my English just isn't perfect. It will also help to finish the story. Motivation and all. BTW, how can I contact you? Can't find the feature, lol.
| Title: HUMILIATED
| 15 Sep 2008 4:53 am
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| Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous)
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Good heavens, that's creepy!
Author's Response: Isn't it just!
Wow. What a mess for Harry. I hope that things will turn around some how. Awesome story and chapter. Thanks for sharing it!
Author's Response: Thank you. I am trying to improve my English, too. I don't see all grammar mistakes, but more than before... It's also not yet "flowing" the way I'd like it to, but I edit all the time.
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