| Title: The Freak In The Mirror
| 20 Nov 2008 3:15 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I love this story, and I'm really hoping that you haven't totally abandoned it!
| Title: The Freak In The Mirror
| 28 Apr 2008 10:13 am
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| Reviewer: Malora (Signed)
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Great idea! I've never managed to read an entire Severitus. Nothing against the fine Severitus writers out there; I just have issues with the premise. But this seems perfect for me—-all the twists and turns of the plot in short bites. The whole idea of linked drabbles is fascinating to me, too. If a novel is like a movie, then a series of drabbles is like telling a story with a set of snapshots.
Anyway, wonderful start. Thanks for sharing your story!
Author's Response: My biggest problem with them is that they never end. Either literally, as in the author wrote and wrote and wrote but never managed to finish the thing, or figuratively, as in the author wrote and wrote and wrote... and wrote and wrote and wrote.... If a story is like a 2 hour movie, a Severitus tends to be a 12-hour mini series. A 12-hour mini series that tends to get cancelled around part 10. :-D
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