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Reviews For Your Basic Nightmare
Yoo hooo! Where are you...? You have two amazing stories, that you have let go, please update them. I love them!
Awesome. Clearly, I adore this story. :) I'm grateful you didn't go into a explanation for his conception. That's usually the point where I give up on Severitus, as it strains my suspension of disbelief. I like that a private moment between two adults remains private. I also like that you wrote the whole conversation without dialogue tags, and yet it was clear from the words who was speaking. Tricky to pull off, but effective and involving when you can. Author's Response: Yeah, every time Snape starts explaining how Harry was conceived, I brace myself. The worst, I think, is when someone (Snape or someone else) gives so many details that it's actually kind of creepy when you consider they're talking to a teenager. |
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