Meep. I love how your story just flows...kudos.
Title: Gold
| 05 May 2008 3:35 pm
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Reviewer: SH (Anonymous)
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oh... extremly short chapters but just great nevertheless! *looks forward for more*
Title: Gold
| 03 May 2008 7:08 pm
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Reviewer: Doppleganger (Anonymous)
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What I'm really curious is whether Harry still looks like Tom Riddle (the likeness was something i loved about the series) and how much he's changed. *shrugs* I think the similarities would be greater now. Paler skin and dark eyes. A father whose rejected him. I really like this fic (as well as your other ones) and how you update soon.
Wow! I was skeptical at first that this could work, but its really good. I like this style and hope you update soon.
Title: Gold
| 30 Apr 2008 8:13 pm
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Reviewer: Lio Saoirse (Anonymous)
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Very interesting! Love severitus fics n I like the almost vague quality toy story has. Very original in a fic that isn't really supposed to! Ha!
Lio
I love this story so far. Cliched, yes, as you said, but intriguing and gripping despite it. i like Snape and lupin's reactions. Please update as soon as possible.
Very interesting story. Are we ever going to get any background on Lily/Severus. And Griffindors are idiots (I always said they were)
Title: Gold
| 29 Apr 2008 8:26 am
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Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous)
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This is fascinating. The short chapters work really well to convey the situation, and you're doing a great job xD
I love your work in this format. You use the drabbles to move at such a brisk pace, yet the depth of what Harry is going through is still conveyed well to the reader. Excellent! I'm looking forward to seeing more of it.
Utterly brilliant. My eyes were glued to the screen through all 21 chapters. So poetic...so sparse... I love it.
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