Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Cause and Effect 24 Nov 2008 10:00 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've just discovered your story and I find the beginning very promising.
    I hope Snape will try to get the full story out of Harry and get the real reasons he punched Malfoy; maybe Blaise could quietly fill the professor in.
    And I liked, in the 2nd chapter, that you mentionned Dumbledore and his "calculating" gaze : I will never be able to understand how people see him as a kind man. In canon, he shamelessly uses Harry and many other people (Severus, Remus, the Weasleys, Sirius, ...). I hope you will show him in an ambiguous light because,while his goals might be worthy, the means he uses could stand an improvement in ethics.

    Author's Response: Dumbledore's tarnishing in the seventh book, in my opinion, was one of the things Rowling really got right in the seventh book. He is not an evil man, but he can be a cruel one. I'm really hoping to be faithful to canon while simultaneously exploring the characters in more depth than was done. Really, I'm trying to justify my decision to double major in English and Psychology as a method of making my characters more believable.
Title: Cause and Effect 24 Nov 2008 8:15 pm
Reviewer: GratefulGuest (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! What a pleasent surpise!
    I'm so glad you did not give this story up! It's very promissing- language, interesting characters, intrigung and uncommon begining...
    Thank you and please, please, update soon!

    Author's Response: I'll try. Thanks so much for reading! I absolutely adore the readers on this site...
Title: Chapter 1 - A House for Masks 17 Oct 2008 10:43 pm
Reviewer: LaLaLand (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH MERLIN! This story is Wicked good! But you haven't UPDATED!!!! This is torture! Please please please update soon!
    And Again, GREAT JOB!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you enjoyed reading the new chapter.
Title: Chapter 1 - A House for Masks 12 Oct 2008 5:29 pm
Reviewer: Lotiolentus (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome! Keep going :)

    Your style is amazing, I really like it.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm always worried my style will be a little too...lighthearted I guess?...in tone. Or maybe silly is the right word. I'm glad you appreciate it.
Title: Chapter 1 - A House for Masks 14 Aug 2008 9:12 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) [Report This]
    I really LOVE this plot so far. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
    Thanks.
    Nightshade :)

    Author's Response: I'll do what I can. :) Love the penname...does that make you deadly?
Title: Chapter 1 - A House for Masks 24 Jul 2008 5:05 am
Reviewer: MorwenIsilwen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Arrgh! *flails*

    I can't believe that I haven't read this before... I love it!

    Really hope that you haven't suffered from writer's block, RL, or any other such tragedy, because this is an amazing idea, and you're playing it out really well.

    Author's Response: It was kind of all of the above, but things have taken a definite turn for the calmer now. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 1 - A House for Masks 21 Jul 2008 10:13 pm
Reviewer: SilverMoonLight (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is very good so far. Please update soon! :)
Title: Chapter 1 - A House for Masks 29 Jun 2008 11:49 pm
Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes, I like this. I enjoyed Harry addressing the Hat as 'sir'. I commend your use of a minor character as a supporting character rather than altering the established cannon roles of the other supporting characters.

    Again, I do hope you get a chance to come back and add to this from time to time. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for you.

    Congratulations on excellent composition skills, by the way.

    Author's Response: Uh...wow. Thanks. Congratulations of use of articulate and insightful language in a review.
Title: Prologue - Two Universes 29 Jun 2008 11:40 pm
Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Now here's a premise that hasn't been done before. I think this is one of the most likely motivations I've seen yet.

    When I first read the summary I thought you were planning on having Snape take vengance on Harry by killing him with kindness, which I didn't quite get, but this stealing from James makes perfect sense.

    I really hope you get a chance to finish this.
Title: Chapter 1 - A House for Masks 19 Jun 2008 10:44 am
Reviewer: narcoleptic86@gmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please email me when you update. Enjoyed the first two chapter and can't wait for the next ^_^

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