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Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 8:28 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very happy you did a sequel so soon... I love the journal style narration for the chapter and love Harry’s little comments like the fact that his grandpa is so much strict than his dad...like all children he knows what he would get away with and with whom (great that Tobias seems to be firmly established as a loving member of the family)...love that Harry tries to give his dad and grandpa the Snape glare LOL... good intro to Inky (a panther cub version of Harry...hope Sev has a rolled up newspaper put aside LOL). This was a great chapter good start...

    PS: I am hoping for a new segment of Hidden Away to be coming soon

    Author's Response:

    Yup, Harry's one smart cookie, and he would know exactly who he could con into doing things the way he wants them, as you'll see with Sirius in the next chapter.  Harry's Snape glare might not work on the two adult Snapes but he learned to use it on kids, as you'll see next chapter.  As for Inky, yes the panther is a bundle of trouble, much like his owner! 

    I have to do some more research before I'm ready to write the next part of the Hidden Away series, so I cna get that authentic New Orleans flavor, but it's coming! 

     

Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 7:53 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *smiles* Adorable! I like this style, switching between points of veiw.

    Author's Response: Thanks and you'll see Sev's POV in later chapters, like with the dates and things, it's pretty funny!
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 6:06 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What fun! I can hardly wait to see what your next chapter brings!

    Author's Response: Lots of laughs and a surprise or two! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 5:24 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, the journal is great - hopefully, Severus will respect Harry's privacy and Harry won't get his mouth washed out with soap.

    I am hoping that Tobias will move in with them. He could watch Harry and some of his friends - especially if there is a pretty young witch in Severus' future (you know, for dates and things - I am sure Harry would like a little brother or sister.)

    Author's Response: Yes, well we all know how private Sev is, so I don't think he'll be sneaking a look inside Harry's journal anytime soon--LOL!  As for Tobias moving in, umm the man does like his privacy and needs his space too, but he'll be around to babysit a lot in this one.  And yes, eventually Harry would like a brother or sister!
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 4:55 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Totally cute, I love reading things from Harry's point of view. You write the mind of a six year old very well. I'm really glad that Sev let Harry keep Inky, hopefully it'll teach him more responsibility and not cause too much trouble. Can't wait to see what Sirius will say about the newest member of the family, and it'll be intresting to see Harry's interactions with Hermione. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you like little Harry's viewpoint, I think it's refreshing and very funny to write. Actually, Jade Sullivan suggested I write this from Harry's POV and I took her advice! 
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 4:47 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hurray for the sequel, and for Harry getting to keep Inky. Dog animagus vs. panther cub with possible magical abilities . . . that's going to be interesting xD

    Author's Response: Yup and it's going to be a very interesting year for them all! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 4:29 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay a sequel! S very quick too! And it's lovely, I laughed at some parts really hard! Can't wait to see what happens next! Great story!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter.  I love writing little Harry!
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 4:23 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! harry's so adorable and I could picture everything! Sounds like they've got their hands full raising that panther cub! Great start!

    Author's Response: Yes they do! Thanks for reviewing you were my first!!

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