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Title: Your Magical Child 23 Aug 2008 11:22 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You're a good storyteller and taking the reader through it comes with apparent ease to you (a practiced hand in writing, I daresay?), though in itself (the plot, that is) it's rather cliche-ridden and reminds forcibly of a soppy family film scenario. Otherwise, I enjoy reading your works. Well, honestly, who doesn't love fairy-tales, even if they're too good to be true? ;)

    Author's Response: If you've read the previous book in this series, Never Again, then you'll know that Severus and Harry have been through much trauma and angish to get to where they are in this sequel.  I felt that it was time for them to have, especially for Severus to have, the happy ending he deserved.  After all, Harry was given his own happy ending in DH, and Snape wasn't.  This then, is my version of a different life for both of them, the life that could have been, but wasn't.  Sorry if you don't like sappy family stories.  I get tired of writing the grim bitter spy after awhile, but if you're looking for something more traditonal, read The Heir To Prince Manor.
Title: Your Magical Child 04 Jul 2008 3:41 am
Reviewer: brenda-wood (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL sev and alaina sitting in a tree

    KISSING

    this is gonna be fun

    Author's Response: Boy, is it ever! And that's right, sev and alaina will be kissing come a few chapters! Yay for romance!
Title: Your Magical Child 02 Jun 2008 5:42 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Love Tobias's advice to Sev. Go for it, man1 nothing ventured, nothing gained!

    Author's Response: Yay for romance! Don't ya just love it!
Title: Your Magical Child 25 May 2008 5:23 am
Reviewer: summergirl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome idea, I really like it! Can't wait to read more, what a sweet touching story!

    Author's Response: Thanks, Please do!
Title: Your Magical Child 20 May 2008 8:59 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful Chapter! Can't wait until they date, wink wink nudge nudge

    Author's Response: Yes, the date's coming up in a few chapters, I have the seminar and they'll be getting more involved through that and I have two more chapters with Harry and Sev bonding before the actual date occurs and then Harry will start getting really jealous, resulting in a nice conversation with Tobias and some bonding there.
Title: Your Magical Child 19 May 2008 7:11 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    how was your trip????

    great story...i love the different voices in his head...and him telling them to shut up... almost like having an angel on one should and having an imp on the other....really funny...

    can't wait for the sparks to fly either...about time Sev found another woman...

    R.I.P Lilly

    Author's Response:

    It was awesome! My sister got a great award and the ceremony was beautiful! We are all very proud. 

    I agree, it's time for Severus to find another woman, he needs the companionship!

Title: Your Magical Child 18 May 2008 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aaaah, a romance, a romance. I will be waiting for the next chapter :) L-S

    Author's Response: Great and I hope you enjoy the next part the romance isn't far off.
Title: Your Magical Child 18 May 2008 8:47 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!Thanks for updateing, i look forward to the next one!!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks and keep reading!
Title: Your Magical Child 18 May 2008 5:48 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    what a great chapter, this alaina seems really nice but severus shouldn't jump in to anything without discussing it with harry first, harry won't want to share his dad with anyone else, well apart from tobias and the classes severus is proposing sound awesome and i would like to go to them. i hope inky is ok being home alone

    Author's Response: Inky is fine at home by himself now, he's gotten past the destructo stage.  And Sev knows that Harry must be told about any new person coming into their lives, although Harry isn't going to like it at first, eventually he'll come around, given a lot of talking and time. 
Title: Your Magical Child 18 May 2008 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The idea about having a class to teach the muggle parents is a great one, maybe he could talk to Albus about the idea get some advice on how to conduct it and possibly invite one or two other muggle parents who live in the area to join them or have this kind of groups established elsewhere. Also he could invite other wizards so the muggle parents can develop a network of magical friends, if not now in the near future. (The guide book – great idea LOL)
    Love Alaina and Sev getting together... the fact that he is thinking about her is an indication that something can be developed. The long talk on the phone, even though plutonic was a good start.
    It is great that Tobias could be a dad to Sev and give him advice and that Sev is taking it (great Father/Son moment)

    Author's Response: Yes, that's a good idea, Albus and maybe even Sirius and Remus could help as well, sort of like guest teachers and stuff.  And yes eventually Alaina and Sev will go out.  And who doesn't nee dsome advice from their parent every now and then? 

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