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Reviews For Growing Pains
loved the personal nature of all the characters involved and the hijinks of the kids and the ahem - boys too LOL Author's Response: thanks Bren! Wasn't it a funny chapter? I loved writing it. :)
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can't wait for the date to come! Author's Response: Thanks and I'm almost done beta-ing your chapter too!
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Speaking of which, I bet Tobias can both learn and contribute to these meetings. After all, he now knows the WRONG way and reasons for punishing a child, but can also keep learning (like from Molly since she had to raise 7 magical children). I’m glad he showed up, it shows he is trying to be supportive. Plus, I loved his comment about thinking a bomb went off! Lol. The kids were so funny! You do such a good job writing them, their comments sound so believable. The stories about their first use of accidental magic was interesting to read, and Ron's was so cute ^^. I liked the scene at the end where Remus and Sirius were encouraging Sev to take a chance with Alaina. I loved that one part "How was she looking at me?" I asked. Merlin, but I was pathetic, worse than an adolescent boy on his first prom dance. "Like she was lost and you were the only one who could take her home again," replied my friend. "Trust me, Sev. She likes you." I just thought that sounded both funny and romantic ;). Can't wait to see how that date turns out! I wonder if they will eventually talk about each other’s pasts? Of coarse, that will be when they are more comfortable with each other. Alaina’s ex-husband sounds a bit abusive, like Tobias used to be. Her EX sounds like the type that are completely controlling over the whole family and if the other people don’t agree he’ll be forceful/physical. What a jerk! P.S. I SO want that picture Alaina took of Sev and Inky! Author's Response: Yes and Tobias will actually be a speaker in one of the seminars to come. I modeled the kids after my own nieces and nephews and some of the more embarrasing things they said. Poor Sev, he's so insecure at this point, but he'll calm down eventually. Alaina's ex-husband is an evil man, you'll learn more about him later on. I want that picture too--wouldn't it be soo cute?
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