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Title: You Never Have Time For Me! 27 May 2009 8:49 pm
Reviewer: Ginny Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, see if that had happened to me then I would probably feel the same way. But I was lucky and my parents didnt spilt up. But I think they're gonna now which sucks.

    Author's Response: yes, it really does and I'm sorry to hear that.  I'm glad you can relate to Harry though, because it means I've made him believable.  Thanks for reading!
Title: You Never Have Time For Me! 12 Jul 2008 2:54 am
Reviewer: brenda-wood (Signed) [Report This]
    i like the do you have enough love to go around way of looking at it

    makes it easier for a child to understand

    Author's Response: Yeah, I figured that was a good approach to take, since it's hard for a child to understand the concept otherwise.  I got that idea from my Catholic background, once a kid at CCD asked the teacher how Jesus could love everyone equally, and she said it was because Jesus has enough love for everyone and never runs out of it. 
Title: You Never Have Time For Me! 03 Jun 2008 6:17 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful chapter. Perfect for what is going on. Great use of common problems even for a magical child!

    Author's Response: I like putting my wizards in ordinary situations, because for the most part they go through the same problems everyone else does.  They're still human beings.
Title: You Never Have Time For Me! 02 Jun 2008 5:51 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, a great big hug from Dad was just what Harry needed! Can't wait toread the next one.

    Author's Response: Got that right!
Title: You Never Have Time For Me! 25 May 2008 3:29 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    yay! i cannot wait for the next chapter!

    this one was very sweet!

    Author's Response: Thanks and just wait till you read the next one!
Title: You Never Have Time For Me! 25 May 2008 3:24 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this chapter Harry really got everything out, as I was reading I kept thinking but what about...and then he says it - great chapter it really covers a child’s view of "growing pains".
    I think however that it is a bit soon to talk about marriage that was really fast, Harry and Sev talked as if it was a given (I don't know if I am ready for Sev to remarry LOL). If I could predict I would venture that Daniel might enter the picture soon and put in an adventure for our boys.

    Author's Response: Well, actually Harry brings it up and Severus says maybe someday but as of now no one has proposed or even discussed it, but Severus is considering it quite carefully.  However he hasn't asked Alaina and she hasn't indicated to him that she's ready to marry yet, she's still trying to get over Daniel's abuse.  As for your prediction . . .wait and see!  Thanks for your review!
Title: You Never Have Time For Me! 25 May 2008 2:55 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter! The interaction between father & son was brilliant! My favorite chapter so far!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm so glad you liked it!
Title: You Never Have Time For Me! 25 May 2008 2:49 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter ! Loved it!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: You Never Have Time For Me! 25 May 2008 1:32 am
Reviewer: preposterous purple crocodile (Anonymous) [Report This]
    aww! :) that was perfect!
    xox

    Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
Title: You Never Have Time For Me! 24 May 2008 11:07 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a very sweet, emotional, much needed talk. Sev explained things perfectly; how you can love more then one person and still love people even if they are gone.

    I like how you had Harry's point of view in the beginning of the chapter, it made us really sympathize with the poor little kid. I could really put myself in his place and see how he felt about things, and then how he slowly realized what Sev was telling him.

    The ending was really cute, can't wait to read that story!

    P.S. About Lily’s portrait: I didn’t mean that I thought it meant Sev didn’t love Lily anymore, I just though maybe it was a sign of Harry thinking Alaina was taking Lily’s place. Which she isn’t! But yeah, seems I was just reading too much into it after all ^^;

    Author's Response: great! I really wanted you to see this from Harry's POV, since it really affected him so much.  And the next chapter will be posted soon, it's really funny!  Thanks as always for your lovely reviews, you really touch on all the things in my work and it shows that you really absorb what I'm writing, so I'm very grateful!   

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