LOL
lily and james were too much
Author's Response: Weren't they, though? I laughed when I wrote this chapter!
| Title: The Night You Were Born
| 03 Jun 2008 6:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed)
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OMG that was a touching story! How sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks, I liked writing this part, it was funny and sweet.
| Title: The Night You Were Born
| 02 Jun 2008 5:52 am
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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Wonderful, couldn't have written it better myself! You did a terrific job and you should be very proud.
Author's Response: Aww, you're sweet!
| Title: The Night You Were Born
| 27 May 2008 2:14 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Felt like I was there! Great job! If James was my hisband, I'd of slapped him too the big dork!
Author's Response: Thanks and I agree! Some men are sooo stupid!
*sniff* I almost want to cry! That was adorable! I don't know what else to say. I'm going to go read it again now.
Author's Response: Aww! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, I thought it was very sentimental and sweet. And I've sent you the next chapter of Heir to beta.
| Title: The Night You Were Born
| 26 May 2008 12:51 am
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| Reviewer: preposterous purple crocodile (Anonymous)
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James is a dummy :P You would think he would at least find out a little bit about it beforehand! lol I would have whacked him! What a cute story! Sev did well for his first unsupervised delivery! Responsibilities are scarier if no one else can take the blame if something goes wrong.
By the way, I forgot to say that I liked the reference to Harry and Lexy up a tree last chapter. :) thanks!
I was wondering if we would be able to see more of Alaina and Harry together though?
Super job!
I hope you have some other cool ideas left!
xox
Author's Response: Most fathers are pretty clueless when it comes to labor and delivery. My niece had her husband Fall Asleep on her while she was having her 2nd baby! She was in dire pain and he was snoring! No joke. I think she wanted to kill him. And you will be seeing more of Alaina, Harry, and Lexy as well as Tobias.
Man, talk about stress! I give all my sympathy to Lily, I can only imagine what that poor woman was going through while trying to have her baby. Poor Sev, I'd most likely pass out, he did good. Childbirth sounds scary, lol. I thought it was really funny when Lily kissed Sev and James was all huffy, and her comment that childbirth really IS that bad. James was so stupid! I wanted to deck him for his dense comments. But yeah, sounds like Harry has quite a story.
It's good that Sev will have a time for just him and Harry. Harry deserves to have a time to himself and his dad until he feels more comfortable with the new situation.
I'll be waiting for you next chapter! I'm always excited to see what you have planned next.
P.S. The ending scene was so cute! Now I wish I had a picture of that scene too ^^.
Author's Response: Me too and thanks as always for your reviews, Beth! You rock! I can't tell you how many stories my sister has told me about men in the delivery room and what they do . .. she should write a book. She's an OBGYN, by the way and helped me with this chapter.
I finally had some time to read! These last several chapters have been great too! The zoo scene was very amusing and I'm quite surprised no one thought of accidental magic as the cause of the animals escaping. I like your new characters too. It's good to see Sev finally dating. This story has ben great so far and I look forward to your next updates! :)
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm happy you finally had time to R&R! Yes, the zoo scene was one of my better humor moments and you're right, it is kind of funny no one thought of the kids as the cause of the animals getting out, but then again, you had some pretty panicked people there!
| Title: The Night You Were Born
| 25 May 2008 8:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous)
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That labour reminded me a bit of my own - my ex-husband told me "you're not behaving like a lady, I'm sure none of the women in my family behaved like that” Yeah right. It’s good for Harry to understand how much he is loved he needs some father/son time and a special day would be good for them both. Good Chapter
Author's Response: At that point is when I'd of taken my fist and popped him one! LOL! And Harry and Sev need some time alone once in awhile.
| Title: The Night You Were Born
| 25 May 2008 7:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous)
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*cooing* awwwwwww!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm really glad you liked it!
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