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Title: Just the Way You Are 01 Aug 2008 8:43 pm
Reviewer: brenda-wood (Signed) [Report This]
    romance was a plus

    then home to the pound as it were

    uh oh

    Author's Response: Yes it was and now comes the reckoning.
Title: Just the Way You Are 07 Jun 2008 1:04 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh wow! i have tears in my eyes! that was so beautiful! wow!

    I love that you included the phantom of the opera...it is my favorite play! i can't get enough of it!

    oh boy, i don't want to be in harry's shoes...

    on to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: It's mine too, I've seen it 3 times!  Yeah, it's a keeper!  I used to write romance before I wrote fanfiction, can you tell?  And poor Harry, he's really in for it!
Title: Just the Way You Are 06 Jun 2008 10:44 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    The date was beautiful and very romantic, I enjoyed reading it a lot! Severina sounds like a sweetie and it was very nice of her parents to do what they did for Sev and Alaina. Sev sure wasn’t expecting everything to be on the house!

    I absolutely loved the talk between Sev and Alaina! It was great that they could share so much about themselves with each other and told how much they mean to the other. Perfect chapter title, they truly love each other just they way they are! *hides from booing crowd chucking tomatoes* lol

    Well, time for the kids to face the music. The house is a disaster and what they did was truly wrong. Sev will definitely be giving a long disappointment speech and I hope the boys regret their actions. Lexy should be fine, I cant see the boys pinning her in with them. I wonder how Tobias and Sirius will take the news that the kids duped them and took advantage of their state?

    I'll review your other chapters as soon as I find time to read them! Promise ^^.

    P.S. When I read that the guy (a concierge?) had a peacock feather quill, I totally thought of Lockhart! I wonder what he’d be doing in your fic? The thought of the pompous git doing something really menial cracks me up.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, that would be really funny, now wouldn't it? Pity I didn't think of it before.  But I had Tristan use a peacock quill because it's fancy and it's a fancy restaurant.  And I thought of the chapter title for this while I was at work.  Our Muzak station was playing Billy Joel, I'm sure you can guess what song was on, LOL.  And I was stuck for a title and suddenly I thought, wow that's perfect!

    And the kids will indeed have to face two angry Snape men, or at least Harry will, Ron gets to face Molly, poor kid.   

     

Title: Just the Way You Are 05 Jun 2008 3:07 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! I love the romance! You really know how to write it. But I don't envy Harry or Ron now!

    Author's Response: Thank you! And I don't envy them either, the little buggers!
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it! Great Chapter! I am so excited they expressed their love for each other. Ron and Harry are going to be int Trouble!

    Author's Response: Heaven help them, but they are in soo much trouble! Thanks for reviewing! You're a great R&R-er!
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 10:19 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    sevs and alainas date went really well and was really well written and very true to there characters, little rina seems cute for a baby, glad sev has seen her. sev and alainas talk about being perfect was a really enlightening conversation.

    oh dear someones in trouble and i did warn them to hide, i can see corner time coming up

    Author's Response: Great and I'm glad you liked it.  I tried to give them some time alone plus a little romance too!  And yes, the boys are in so much big trouble!
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 6:01 pm
Reviewer: August Sky (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooo, they're in for it now.

    I don't think I've reviewed in this series before, but I absolutely adore it. Very few kid fics catch my attention, but this one is truly remarkable. Keep up the great work!

    Author's Response: Thank you! If you like this one, you ought to read Never Again, the prequel.  It's third person and you get more adult POV's as well as Harry's of course!
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 3:40 pm
Reviewer: preposterous purple crocodile (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *sighs* *swoons* that was beautiful! I wish there were actual men like that. romantic, gentle, kind, sexy, single and attracted to 'ordinary' women. In my generation they are all immature, crude and attracted to barbie impersonators. I want a snape *sighs*. It was nice to see sev telling a bit more about his story at last! Good on him.

    Phantom is awesome! *sings* "Angel of Music!"

    I am curious what sort of punishment is in order for the prank! Poor Harry! Don't be /too/ harsh on him- he didn't really mean any harm- he just was stupid and didn't think about what he was doing. He's at an age when kids don't really feel like they should have to be supervised, and he lives in a world where giving potions to people is normal, so I don't suppose the significance and consequences of drugging your babysitters would really have occured to him. I bet he will work it out soon though!

    Author's Response: Yes, I wish there were more of them too!  Phantom is my all time fav musical.  And the punishment for the prank is coming up, and even though Harry is young he DID know that what he did was wrong, and Severus will make sure he understands that what he did was dangerous. 
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 2:31 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful! Where are all the guys like that in real life, huh? Gone with the wind, I guess. And I love Phantom--my FAVORITE!

    But two little boys are going to get it!

    Author's Response: I don't know.  When i find out, I'll let you know, haha!
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 1:22 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    aww the romance was really sweet, i want a healer snape! looking forward to the consequences for harry and ron though leaves me wondering how they're gonna get out of this one!

    Author's Response: You and me both! LOL!  As for Harry & Ron, what makes you think they're gonna get out of it? Severus is NOT happy.

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