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Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 7:59 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was so romantic, a lovely dinner then a play and not just any play Phantom of the Opera (my all time favourite), followed by a romantic walk along the river (in the moonlight I'm sure) just talking... Are there any real Snapes out there I want one...LOL

    Author's Response: Phantom is mine too, I've been too see it three times (once with Michael Crawford as Phantom--sigh!) so I just had to have them go there.  And I want one too, because he sure knows how to treat a lady. 
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 6:12 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww this was great! I love how you linked the couple in NA here and Sev got to see his namesake. So cute! The romance was wonderful, I just cried and I love the part where Sev said he saw his heart reflected in Alaina's eyes. Gorgeous! Can't wait to see what kind of punishment the kids will get!

    Author's Response: All right! That line was one of my favorites too!  You're sweet!  And the punishment is coming, unfortunately for two naughty boys.
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 6:09 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww, I loved it! The whole dinner and the play, I love Phantom too! and the romantic walk by the river . . .beautiful! I especially loved it when Sev told Alaina he loved her just the way she was. So sweet! And I love the nickname he gave her . . blackbird. Fits perfectly! I want to go on a date with Sev!

    Author's Response: You, me, and I think everyone else who read this, LOL!  Glad you liked her nickname and that's the kind of man I want, who likes me just the way I am.  Where are they?
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 5:41 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    It was a lovely evening.

    What is good about what is going to happen next is that Alaina will see Severus at his angriest. And she will see that although those two will be well and truly punished, they won't be abused or belittled. Sometimes you can't trust those you love until you see them at their angriest.

    Can't wait for the fireworks to start. And I imagine Tobias will have a little something to say about being drugged.

    My only question is that the twins created this snack. They are only a couple of years older than Ron, so they are between 8 and 9. If they could create that at that age, how did Hogwarts survive?

    Author's Response:

    yes, it was.

     

    And Alaina will indeed see Severus angry, but also realize that unlike her ex, he can control himself.  Tobias will have PLENTY to say about this the next morning.

     

    And the twins? They were brilliant child geniuses and God only knows about the school--it's the mystery of the decade! LOL!

Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 5:38 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw, so romantic. And now Snape's mad. Not good to get a Snape mad. I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Got that right and now Harry's got two Snapes mad at him.  Can we spell trouble?
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 5:34 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    You have a very creative mind :) And it's nice that Severus is able to enjoy his life in this story. Makes me happy. I enjoyed the conversation Snape and Alaina had over Tobias. I think it's important that Severus realizes that Tobias has truly changed and is still working to keep himself sober and under control.

    I just knew you'd leave it off right there...lol. We're quite the cliff-hanger devils tonight, I suppose. *sly high five*

    By the way, I think you're right about Severus being the one to deal with Harry's behavior. The more I keep thinking about what they did, though, the more I just can't believe how dangerous it was. I hope Severus emphasizes that point...

    Anyway, really great chapter :) Looking forward to the next!

    Author's Response: Yes, Sev and Tobias have a lot of their past to live down, and it will take time for them to do so.  And there will be plenty of consequences for both Harry and Ron to deal with.  (An angry Molly is no fun to deal with either!) And I do love my cliffies!  Severus will have a lengthy discussion with Harry about the dangers of trying an unknown magical substance and also a rather fierce argument with Tobias over who and how Harry should be punished. 

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