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Reviews For Growing Pains
Author's Response: Yes, he will get his in the end. He is a very evil man!
and no amulet poor kids and poor parents too Author's Response: yes, it has been forgotten on the nightstand.
Author's Response: yes, and now we get to see the villain of the piece!
I sure hope the kids get out of this alright, those guys sound like they mean business. I bet Sev will know something is wrong though, since Harry left his amulet and is currently missing. Who knows how long it will take to find the kids though? Off to read and review your next chapter! Author's Response: Yes, they are no laughing matter and there are more of them than just those three, as you'll find out later on. And Sev will move heaven and earth to rescue his son and Lexy and Mione too!
Author's Response: True, but she did need her bag to do her homework, and none of them knew the creeps would be waiting to grab her.
Though, darling, I did expect a little less cliche from you! It was a bit too much like a bad mafia movie with the "will do, boss" sidekicks and chloroform cloth. *giggles* I couldn't quite take it seriously. Poor parents when they find out! I wonder what Dan plans to do with the extras? Anyway, I wonder how long it will take the parents to work out what's going on. I don't suppose dan left a kidnapping note (he isn't after a ransom i suppose), but the parents will start worrying when their kids don't come home on the bus. It will prolly take a while I suppose for them to work out that all three kids are missing, and they probably wouldn't jump to the conclusion that they had been kidnapped straight away. I wonder how you will work out their rescue. I assume sev will find them magically, but for this type of thing the muggle police need to be involved, and they might freak out about the magic part. At least, I hope the police are involved, because i really want dan to go to jail for forever. Though i suppose you could just kill him, but again, the muggle police might fuss. looking forward to the next chapter! Author's Response: Well, they had to knock the kid out quickly, and they didn't want to kill him, so that's really the best way. And Brent is a typical dumb idiot type of guy, so he's meant to sound like that. Jack and Brent are "friends" in an acquaintance type way, Dan hired them to help kidnap his daughter and not for much else. There are two other people besides them in on the operation whom you'll meet later. And Dan might very well want some money out of the other parents, or hold them hostage for a different reason. He will certainly be contacting Alaina to gloat over his success at getting Lexy, he's just that kind of bastard. And it would be too easy for Severus to just cast a spell, so I won't be going that route, you'll find out why. And while they might decide to involve the real police late ron, that'll only be after they've trounced the bad guys to within an inch of their lives, and heven help them if Tobias goes on the rescue attempt, they just might end up in a cemetery, because nobody messes with his grandson. And if I do decide to kill off Dan, they could always say it was self defense, or they could simply vanish the body, since Dan is there illegally, and if he disappears, oh well.
Author's Response: I shall and then you'll see what the kids have been going through.
Author's Response: oh, he will, never fear! Dan's going to be confronted with the Four Horsemen of the Wizard Apocalypse!
Author's Response: I will! Promise!
Author's Response: Hang on, the cavalry's coming! |
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