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Reviews For Growing Pains
loved the personal nature of all the characters involved and the hijinks of the kids and the ahem - boys too LOL Author's Response: thanks Bren! Wasn't it a funny chapter? I loved writing it. :)
KISSING this is gonna be fun Author's Response: Boy, is it ever! And that's right, sev and alaina will be kissing come a few chapters! Yay for romance!
sorry its taking so long for me to catch up - but I do love this story and i will get there Author's Response: yay! You're reviewing again!!! I was getting worried there. I've been writing like crazy, guess you can tell that, huh? LOL!
Anyways, Harry was already sharing his dad, so Lexy only sharing her mom and getting two in the deal wouldn't seem too fair to any child unless they get the idea explained to them first ("because I said so" doesn't cut it - never did with me at any rate...) And, besides that, Grandpa has two knees - he could've shown them both how at the same time, or he could've just knelt between them and demonstrated to both - but then, most adults don't consider how their actions look to children. Oh, and the homework on Friday? If I was Sev, I would've offered Harry a choice: he could do it right then, or he could do it in place of his bedtime story, and make sure he's in bed by the same time, no exceptions. Harry probably would've jumped at doing it then (he likes his stories.) Author's Response: Actually at the end of the last chapter, Severus does tell Harry he has a special day to spend just with him whenever he's off, since Healers don't get regular days off but he did promise him that. As for the fishing trip, kids will usually argue over stuff like that, I know my three nephews did, and inevitably one of them would get in trouble for it. And Tobias did eventually get around to explaining how he still loved and always would love Harry, it just took him a little longer to realize why Harry was acting that way, since normally he behaves around his grandfather. And the homework, that was a good idea, but Sev didn't think of it.
Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes it does that, don't ask me why.
Author's Response: yay! And thanks, I'll be working on them soon!
i vote for both a prequel and sequel for writing such wonderful fics i give you a crate of butterbeer, hundreds of chocolate frogs and products from zonkos Author's Response: yay! And thank you very much, I love all of that stuff! LOL! I'll be working on the next stories in this universe as soon as I finish Heir and the new one for Hide Yourself Away.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm planning on it, as soon as I finish the other story I'm working on.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I like doing differing POV's sometimes, because it really lets you get inside someone's head and see what motivates them and makes them behave a certain way. Especially from the POV of a child. By the way will you be updating Raindrops soon?
Author's Response: It's mine too, which was why I had that reference in there! I love that movie and I also love weddings. And I had to put that last part in there, for I really believe the souls of the departed can come back to visit on special occasions. My grandmother did for me when I got confirmation and again for my sister on her wedding day. |
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