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Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 5:23 pm
Reviewer: Vickie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it!!!!!!!! I can see Harry and Inky getting into alot of trouble together and poor Severus developing some gray hairs. LMAO

    Author's Response: Boy oh boy are you ever right!  Heaven help them all!
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 4:25 pm
Reviewer: brenda wood (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it

    my only criticism is that harry always seems to talk and think about how much he is going ot spanked or timed out and 99 percent of the kids I work with hate to be punsihed but they never talk about it this much

    Love how tobias is getting used to magic and how minerva used her transfiguration skills to diagnose inky and I am anticipating meeting hermione

    Author's Response: Harry is very reflective, Sev's tried to teach him to think about consequences BEFORE he acts, and it works--up to a point.
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 1:25 pm
Reviewer: BuckeyeBelle (Signed) [Report This]
    I think this is really good and it's interesting to see it from Harry's POV. I also think it would be nice to see at least a paragraph or two of the adults' POV on the same situation. Harry glossed over Tobias moving back home, as I assume he had to do once he was well enough for the issue of an alcoholic living in the same house with Harry to come up. Of course they would have shielded Harry from that.

    Also, it would have been interesting to see Sev getting attached to that little fuzzy nuisance in spite of himself. (BTW, I think a black panther is an appropriate pet for Severus.)

    Author's Response: You'll be getting Sev's POV in another two chapters here and also when he's out on the date with a certain classmate's (you haven't met her yet) mother, and then you'll see what was going on in his head when Tobias was there and how he ends up liking Inky after all.  Thanks for reviewing, as always!
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 9:10 am
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Couldn't bother to sign in) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey! Wadda you know! Snapey let Harry keep Inky (idoit! - I can foresee some difficulties and I don't think I need to be Trawlawney to see that!)

    It was cute written from Harry's POV...

    Lovely. :)

    Author's Response: You're right, but who can resist those green eyes? LOL!
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 8:28 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very happy you did a sequel so soon... I love the journal style narration for the chapter and love Harry’s little comments like the fact that his grandpa is so much strict than his dad...like all children he knows what he would get away with and with whom (great that Tobias seems to be firmly established as a loving member of the family)...love that Harry tries to give his dad and grandpa the Snape glare LOL... good intro to Inky (a panther cub version of Harry...hope Sev has a rolled up newspaper put aside LOL). This was a great chapter good start...

    PS: I am hoping for a new segment of Hidden Away to be coming soon

    Author's Response:

    Yup, Harry's one smart cookie, and he would know exactly who he could con into doing things the way he wants them, as you'll see with Sirius in the next chapter.  Harry's Snape glare might not work on the two adult Snapes but he learned to use it on kids, as you'll see next chapter.  As for Inky, yes the panther is a bundle of trouble, much like his owner! 

    I have to do some more research before I'm ready to write the next part of the Hidden Away series, so I cna get that authentic New Orleans flavor, but it's coming! 

     

Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 7:53 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *smiles* Adorable! I like this style, switching between points of veiw.

    Author's Response: Thanks and you'll see Sev's POV in later chapters, like with the dates and things, it's pretty funny!
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 6:06 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What fun! I can hardly wait to see what your next chapter brings!

    Author's Response: Lots of laughs and a surprise or two! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 5:24 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, the journal is great - hopefully, Severus will respect Harry's privacy and Harry won't get his mouth washed out with soap.

    I am hoping that Tobias will move in with them. He could watch Harry and some of his friends - especially if there is a pretty young witch in Severus' future (you know, for dates and things - I am sure Harry would like a little brother or sister.)

    Author's Response: Yes, well we all know how private Sev is, so I don't think he'll be sneaking a look inside Harry's journal anytime soon--LOL!  As for Tobias moving in, umm the man does like his privacy and needs his space too, but he'll be around to babysit a lot in this one.  And yes, eventually Harry would like a brother or sister!
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 4:55 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Totally cute, I love reading things from Harry's point of view. You write the mind of a six year old very well. I'm really glad that Sev let Harry keep Inky, hopefully it'll teach him more responsibility and not cause too much trouble. Can't wait to see what Sirius will say about the newest member of the family, and it'll be intresting to see Harry's interactions with Hermione. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you like little Harry's viewpoint, I think it's refreshing and very funny to write. Actually, Jade Sullivan suggested I write this from Harry's POV and I took her advice! 
Title: Raising Inky 07 May 2008 4:47 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hurray for the sequel, and for Harry getting to keep Inky. Dog animagus vs. panther cub with possible magical abilities . . . that's going to be interesting xD

    Author's Response: Yup and it's going to be a very interesting year for them all! Thanks for reviewing!

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