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Reviews For Growing Pains
Author's Response: I felt they needed another talk and I wanted to bring Eileen into it as well, which is why I had her appear at the end and leave the red rose and Lily as well.
Author's Response: Umm...you never know. Alaina's not getting any younger, you know. She's twenty-seven, and Harry and Lexy are eight. Plus Sev would love to have a child of his blood.
Author's Response: Yes I will be doing that and I'm going to write another sequel to Hide yourself away as soon as I finish Heir. I'll be doing New orleans next and then 4th year, were some unexpected surprises occur!
I loved that bit. and the one about sirius 'indecent exposure' i can just see it happening! the whole thing was beautiful but what really caught my eye was the last part with his mum and lilly. that really made me cry! but it was incandecently beautiful! i eagerly await your next chapter! Author's Response: Yes, that's Sev the overprotective father to the max. And Sirius, he's just a riot, I crack up every time I write him. And that last part was a brilliant inspiration, I didn't have it planned at all.
Author's Response: Guess you want to join the I Love Inky Fanclub, huh? Of course I'd involve Inky, he's a Snape too!
Author's Response: Thanks and that was unplanned, as I was writing the closing scene, it just came to me. So many of my best ideas do. Like all the humor, most of that's improvs, out of the blue.
Author's Response: Great, that's what I was hoping for!
Can i give you a 100 rating Author's Response: Awww! thanks and of course you can!
The humor in this chapter was great as well! There was loads of it, and I enjoyed it all. The mental image of Sirius actually showing up for the wedding in 'his favorite Quidditch team shirt and bathrobe,' totally cracked me up! Sirius and Regulus's stories were funny too, as a younger sibling I know how it is to have constant teasing between siblings :). Glad to see everyone in the family is in good spirits with each other. I think it's nice that Tobias found a friend in Alaina's dad, he needs a pal whom doesn't drink most of the time. When Bill mentioned they used to have a dog and a dozen cats when Alaina was growing up, I so thought of my family (We have two dogs and six cats ^^;)! Bill and Sue are nice people, they certainly excepted both Sev and the reality of magic very well. I'm so sad to hear there is only one chapter left! *burst into tears* A thing to look forward to though is their new addition to the family. It HAS to be a baby! *Squeee* lol, sorry. I look forward to reading that chapter :) P.S. I think Sev and Alaina should try to preserve the rose and lily so that they last forever. Just an idea :) Author's Response: Hold on, I should have the next chapter posted by tonight or tomorrow! So glad you liked this one, it was a blast to write! And don't worry, I'll probably do another one or two if you wish me too. I like the idea about preserving the flowers, that would be a good thing. And you'll find out about the new addition too!
Author's Response: Awww! So glad you liked it! Here's a pillow for your head. LOL! |
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