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Title: Love You Forever 16 Jun 2008 8:27 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter I loved the way you gave sev a chance to meet his inlaws and have a nice discussion with Tobias. I also liked the way you gave them two ceremonies they were beautiful! I cried.

    Author's Response:

    I felt they needed another talk and I wanted to bring Eileen into it as well, which is why I had her appear at the end and leave the red rose and Lily as well. 

Title: Love You Forever 16 Jun 2008 3:57 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A new addition? Like another pet? It seems a bit soon to have another baby. They just got married. I can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Umm...you never know.  Alaina's not getting any younger, you know.  She's twenty-seven, and Harry and Lexy are eight.  Plus Sev would love to have a child of his blood.
Title: Love You Forever 16 Jun 2008 3:31 am
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVE THIS STORY. Are you going to do Hogwarts years. I want to see Harry and Lexy at Hogwarts. Oh and are you going to do another story in the hide yourself away series. I want to see forth year, and sevs reaction to the tournament.

    Author's Response: Yes I will be doing that and I'm going to write another sequel to Hide yourself away as soon as I finish Heir.  I'll be doing New orleans next and then 4th year, were some unexpected surprises occur!
Title: Love You Forever 15 Jun 2008 7:11 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    "The first boy that lays a finger on her is going to end up as lawn decoration."

    I loved that bit. and the one about sirius 'indecent exposure' i can just see it happening!

    the whole thing was beautiful but what really caught my eye was the last part with his mum and lilly.

    that really made me cry! but it was incandecently beautiful!

    i eagerly await your next chapter!

    Author's Response: Yes, that's Sev the overprotective father to the max.  And Sirius, he's just a riot, I crack up every time I write him. And that last part was a brilliant inspiration, I didn't have it planned at all.
Title: Love You Forever 15 Jun 2008 4:15 pm
Reviewer: TarsieS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Big Purrrrr for Inky!! Thanks for Inky's involvement in the ceremony!!!

    Author's Response: Guess you want to join the I Love Inky Fanclub, huh? Of course I'd involve Inky, he's a Snape too!
Title: Love You Forever 15 Jun 2008 3:11 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the part with Lily and Eileen appearing - that's really beautiful.

    Author's Response: Thanks and that was unplanned, as I was writing the closing scene, it just came to me.  So many of my best ideas do.  Like all the humor, most of that's improvs, out of the blue.
Title: Love You Forever 15 Jun 2008 12:20 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    ahh that was really sweet, made me smile!

    Author's Response: Great, that's what I was hoping for!
Title: Love You Forever 15 Jun 2008 10:00 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't normally cry at weddings but that was so beautiful especially the end with Lily and his mom that was so MAGICAL sniff sniff wipe tears away
    Can i give you a 100 rating

    Author's Response:

    Awww! thanks and of course you can!

     

     

     

     

     

     

Title: Love You Forever 15 Jun 2008 9:54 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVED both traditions of their wedding! But I have to say the wizarding one got me all teary-eyed. When I read about Sev's mom and Lily's spirits showing up, I was so happy! That was beautiful, the whole thing was beautiful!

    The humor in this chapter was great as well! There was loads of it, and I enjoyed it all. The mental image of Sirius actually showing up for the wedding in 'his favorite Quidditch team shirt and bathrobe,' totally cracked me up! Sirius and Regulus's stories were funny too, as a younger sibling I know how it is to have constant teasing between siblings :).

    Glad to see everyone in the family is in good spirits with each other. I think it's nice that Tobias found a friend in Alaina's dad, he needs a pal whom doesn't drink most of the time. When Bill mentioned they used to have a dog and a dozen cats when Alaina was growing up, I so thought of my family (We have two dogs and six cats ^^;)! Bill and Sue are nice people, they certainly excepted both Sev and the reality of magic very well.

    I'm so sad to hear there is only one chapter left! *burst into tears* A thing to look forward to though is their new addition to the family. It HAS to be a baby! *Squeee* lol, sorry. I look forward to reading that chapter :)

    P.S. I think Sev and Alaina should try to preserve the rose and lily so that they last forever. Just an idea :)

    Author's Response: Hold on, I should have the next chapter posted by tonight or tomorrow!  So glad you liked this one, it was a blast to write!  And don't worry, I'll probably do another one or two if you wish me too.  I like the idea about preserving the flowers, that would be a good thing. And you'll find out about the new addition too!
Title: Love You Forever 15 Jun 2008 9:27 am
Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *faints from the cuteness*

    Author's Response: Awww! So glad you liked it! Here's a pillow for your head. LOL!

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