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Title: An Unexpected Visitor 15 Jul 2008 12:03 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape got offguard. Hmmmm... Yes, I like it. There are way too many fics where nothing ever surprised Snape enough to loose his blank mask. Nice change. Mila

    Author's Response: I agree, too many writers make Sev invincible and I've never seen him that way.  Tough, strong, but a man with flaws like any other and even a master spy can be taken by surprise and that is what happened here.
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 11 Jun 2008 11:34 pm
Reviewer: MirzeSnape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wonderful chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 01 Jun 2008 6:26 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This sounds like a good start. Be careful how laid back you make Snape sound. I like it how you've made Aunt Petunia not wholly horrible.

    Author's Response: Yes, I think it was time for Petunia to get a makeover, in a big way.  And away from the school Severus is more relaxed in his speech patterns.  After all, he was raised in anormal Muggle household, where they weren't nobles and though his mother was educated, I don't think his father was educated past high school. 
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 21 May 2008 2:46 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I meant to read some of your stories but I just now got to it and it was WAY worth reading. The begining of this chapter where Severus is thinking about the DE's...it was powerful. You used some powerful wording that made me want to scream, "Preach it Severus!" LOl, great first chapter and I loved how you wrote Harry. I'm glad Daughter of Aries gave you the story idea. I'm sure you will make this into a featured story.

    Author's Response: I will certainly try, Scorpia! And if you think this one has powerful emotions, you should check out Never Again, it's one of my favorite Harry/Sev fics and has an emotional punch like a sledgehammer in some parts.  Or so said my reviewers! 
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 18 May 2008 8:34 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    From the description, I thought this was going to be a reply to the Battered Snape for Breakfast challenge.

    Excellent start! I don't have time this morning to read the next chapter, but you've definitely hooked me.

    Poor Snape... but hey, he's out of Voldie's circle now, and that's a good thing.

    Harry has rotten luck. What's he going to do now?!

    Author's Response: I never knew about that challenge, I was just working off of what DaughterofAres gave me.  And Harry really does have the worst luck, but it might chnage.
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 16 May 2008 6:36 pm
Reviewer: danni coles (Anonymous) [Report This]
    update pls

    Author's Response: Thank you, I will as soon as I'm home.
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 15 May 2008 10:37 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, great start!!! Fantastic opening and set up. The characters' thoughts are all done well and in character. I hope that Harry thinks fast!

    Author's Response: Thanks Jan!  I hope you like the rest of it!
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 15 May 2008 9:40 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow this one sounds very interesting can't wait for further chapters!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I should be posting some more this weekend!
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 15 May 2008 1:52 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the beginning so please continue, and lets see what happens in the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'll be posting the next one when I go home, since I'm in VA
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 15 May 2008 6:18 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    nice start...very clever having snape just show up like that...petunia's gonna have a cow!

    Author's Response: Yes, she most certainly is!  Just wait! Hehehe!

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